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| Tiger Shinigami 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseNice story! I love the little details through the entire thing, really helps in describing certain scenes, giving them a nice touch. Great ending, too! Not too forced, but slowly built up to throughout the story. Great work. :D |
| Bakageta 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWords cannot express how wonderful this is. I hank you from the bottom of myself for this amazing story. It was a privledge to read. ~Bakageta |
| Yurilune 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done! I liked the length of this piece, as well! |
| CharmedNightSkye 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was so amazing. Ichigo's world was so cool. I liked the fact that Rukia had to ride in a helicopter and the intense scene with the hollow. I think Ichigo was really believeable in how he eacted after he lost his powers. He would probably act like that. The power transfer was a very neat procedure. I loved Rukia's own personal touch to it. ;) The ending was tres mignon.(very cute). Love those too as a couple. Til later readings |
| Pantherstar 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. It seemed pretty in-character to me too, which I know can be hard to do sometimes. So, all in all, great job! =) |
| Queen of Juiceboxes 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseAWW! That was so cute!! I hope something like this happens in the very end, because it was really in character and extremely realistic (In that Bleach sort of way). Rukia would so do something like risk her powers for Ichigo. Oh, and the way you described Shirayuki is exactly how i pictured her. So GOOD JOB! This was really beautiful! -QJ |
| Pink Chibi Mermaid 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseNice story. Nice ending |
| Alucius 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. Well done :) |
| kaida 2007-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abusereally well written and a very interesting storyline but it would have been better split up into smaller chapters |
| Mara-Lynn 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHow much of your story actually come from the manga? I like how caring Renji is to Rukia... although I'm primarily an IchiRukia fan. Great story! |
| intercostalspace 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abusei have already read this in your LJ. i just thought a review might convince more people to read this beautiful fic of yours. ;D |