I Like It. It really seemed like what would really happen in alices point of view. But I stand correct it I do not like it...I LOVE IT!

Ouh! I love it! Could you write this chapter also from Jaspers POV? It'd be wonderful! XD

Oh man you're making me blush! _

Anywho, this is agreat oneshot! And I think you have Alice down well, too!

Very good.

i luv ur story