 LiQuYu 2008-01-09 . chapter 1Shishido-Niou-Choutarou pairing... So is there is a particular name for this pairing yet? This is my first time hearing of this pairing, and strangely, I like it. XD. I guess reading to many Rikkai fics is starting to rub off on me. =) Niou completely forgot about Sanada in his list of possible people to talk to... Well, let's hope the three of them have a happy ending from all of this. =D |
 lolorama 2007-10-25 . chapter 1...
Wow, I wasn't expecting that! This basically means a threesome, right? XD *giggles insanely* Oh, that will be interesting - I'm assuming you'll be writing more on this, of course!
Ugh, I've ran out of things to say, I'm ever so sorry!
Ichigo-chan XD |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-10-18 . chapter 1Nice story! Love it! |
 awintea 2007-10-01 . chapter 1Oh my.
That was ... positively splendid, and shocking... And ... Wow. xD How wonderfully written.
I am going to stand a little ways from the computer so I can fawn over your writing. =P
-awinchan |
 Jackalackala 2007-09-28 . chapter 1Well.
Welly welly well then.
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IS HE GOING?
I want to know. Don't go, Yukimura, oh please don't go, you're so amazing and even ... blargh. Niou will go crazy without you, you know, and that would suck since then there would really only be six people on the team, and I'm willing to bet that Sanada would lose his mind too, and then there would be five, and otherwise there's really no evidence of a total catastrophic meltdown. Just a partial one. There's a difference, you know. How did they do it when you were in the hospital? Calls to America cost more. And you can't really just take an easy trip or anything, you know. It won't work out. Please accept my humble request.
Love,
The Phantom of the Opera.
Yes, I wrote Yukimura a letter. (Yes, I'm the Phantom of the Opera.) What of it?? I have another book report to do this weekend (English class is so very nasty only I do like my teacher a lot) and I have to write a song, actually. 0.o Well, it's extra credit. But I only have so long left to embarrass myself at this school...why not, eh?
--Is now through with the standard 'not about the story'.--
This was so precious. Niou does introspection in such a realistic/pessimistic manner, since he sort of has an actual grip on what he's thinking about but at the same time shuts out all thoughts that something, maybe something, won't go wrong this time. I love when he talks to himself. Only then I feel really bad since he's just like...berating himself. :( Awwh. Poor Niou.
*numb* ShishidoChoutarouNiou threesome. Unconventional. You got it. :|
Did I interpret that correctly?
I actually think I have to reread the Hottest Fire one since I was really confused during that one and I was like, 'Where is this Shishi/Niou love coming from?' other than the vodka one. But maybe I am just totally behind. Maybe. (Probably.) But I love reading your Niou introspective ones since even though all he seems to be normally is a delinquent or some kind of ne'er-do-well but then it's like...actually... Niou has layers, like an onion. I hate comparing things to onions. *slaps self*
He's so mean to his aunt. It's both their fault, really. Compromise! Acch! And I think that Kirihara has begun to infiltrate Niou's normally mostly-well-functioning brain and littering it with camels and suchlike. Oh dear. Then you'll have two Kiriharas. That will be weird. I don't think that Niou could ever fully become Kirihara, though. That just wouldn't work. His Niouness would eventually previal, albeit after a very long time of inner battles and probably some health issues along the way. Of course, by this time, he would probably have like...no friends or Choutarou left. It would be a very creepy transformation as a whole.
...Am I asleep?
Ahh, so thank you for the story. Um...my favorite quote was probably:
Yagyuu had people skills in spades deep down, but Niou couldn’t rely on his advice for Choutarou-related things because the guy was straight as the proverbial straight thing.
YAGYUU IS STRAIGHT. YE-AH. I totally agree. And I don't know what to think of his 'people skills in spades'. I think I'm afraid. :)
So yes, actually for once I'm going to do what I have to do...
oh screw it. In a few hours.
Thank you muchly! |
 shadowinRW 2007-09-27 . chapter 1Yay! It IS a threesome type thing! And. Ohtori. Suggested. It. How strange. But it makes me happy. I wouldn't be able to do my homework if I had been upset about Niou. But you did distarct me. Shame on you! Or me. I have no self control! Damn! Oh well, I guess I'll survive. |
 Ria Sakazaki 2007-09-27 . chapter 1oh my god a threesome! (drools) please please update soon! unconventional it is but i love it! i like your work. it's not crappy. ^_^ |
 Hropkey 2007-09-26 . chapter 1O_O
Okay, now I DEFINITELY know you're not Sandy, because sandy doesn't do... threesomes?
This is so freakin *weird.*
But it's oddly addicting. I REALLY WANT to see what's happening next.
Oh, and as for a ramble... I'm going to New York over Thanksgiving! I'm uber, uber excited. I get to go to Alice's Tea Cup (super adorable Alice in Wonderland themed tea shop in Manhattan), see my cousin for the first time in something like two years, and I'm going to see something on BROADWAY. Yes.
Oh, and remember to tell my procrastinating, lazy, would-never-ever-give-three-fics-in-one-day Sandy to back sometime soon. |
 critic 2007-09-26 . chapter 1 Hot, Shishido and Niou and cute innocent Choutarou in the middle. That's freaking hot. |
 Jiko 2007-09-26 . chapter 1 I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! HOLY CRUDDY I LOVE YOU! AH! |
 Dazed Dreamer 2007-09-26 . chapter 1Yumm, a threesome. :DD Glad you went with the Haru&Silver, coz then if there wasn't a threesome, there'd be lots of angst and stuff. D: So, yay!
Except sorta-not-yay for the Yukimura going to American thing. DD: Was that a planned foreshadowy detail, or did you just stick that in so Mura wasn't there to advice Niou?
Oh, fave bit: But baiting his temper always gave you a wicked little thrill that you never got from doing the same with anyone else.
I don't know why, but the wicked little thrill part sorta got to me. :DD
And, glad you're rewriting the Cirque du Rikkai, too. It's gonna be soo much funner, I'm sure. More Hiyoshi, please? :DD Haha, I just love his random 'Gekokujou's'.
DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG FOR YOUR UPDATES! *_* I'll poke you every once in a while, yes? xDD
*FAVED* |
 UR such an awesome author 2007-09-26 . chapter 1 You finally updated! Yay :)
“I guess Life isn’t a coin flip,” he said aloud. And he felt he’d never said anything truer.
What a nice clincher. I love how your last sentence sounds so...natural if that makes sense. It was brilliant to incorporate the coin idea thing and instead of just making the idea explode in the reader's face by just putting that sentence at the end, you slowly weaved the idea into the story by talking about Haru not guessing wrong and blah blah blah. This is a horrible sentence but I'm way too lazy to fix it. Sleepy... |
 SilverCyanide 2007-09-26 . chapter 1Yagyuu is as straight as a circle. Or at least as straight as me. :P
THREESOME! I SO CALLED THAT ONE! *insert hearts fanfiction doesn't like*
fhdlfjadlfdaNO!MURACAN'TGOTOTHEUS! I WILL KEL YOU, WOMAN! IF YOU DO THAT I SWEAR I WILL! (Unless it's like Zach in "Bones" who comes back not too long after...and is horribly terribly missed...*sobs at the thought of no Mura.)
Wow...last line ish deepish. Awesome.
*poofs cause she hasta get something done or she'll get keeled*
~KA |
 Ahotep 2007-09-26 . chapter 1Read it...
I didn't expect the relation between Choutarou, Niou and Shishido to end that way. I was really surprised. It may even be funny to see how the two hot heated men will cope with each other...
I hope to read more from you soon... |
 Fallen Bridge 2007-09-26 . chapter 1OMG NUMBER 50! wait so Haru Shishido and Choutarou are a three-som? |
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