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Not bad, I like where this is going. Update soon.

Not bad, I really like how things are going. Update soon.

I am becoming very interested in this story, keep it up.

I like this chapter. I can't wait for the next update.

Hey, I really liked what a sympathetic character you made Storm Shadow. Please post more!

One small comment: whenever you mention a Japanese fighting art, such as kenjutsu, you always put the English translation right next to it. I would personally suggest footnotes, or just writing the name in English.

I'm REALLY looking forward to the next installment...

Please continue this story. This is a vary good transformers Fan Fic, and could go a vary VARY long way if you write it the right way. I like it alot; so please don't stop PS. If you are having troble coming up with ideas for the then you can ask me. I have alot of ideas for this Fan Fic.

cool, i look forward to chapter three ;P

i definately want to read this story! please continue! or i'll continue it for you! just do it onegai!

go kicker go!