CONTESTSHIPPING FOREVER!

I'm really excited to read your story, it was already great, but I understand the feeling as if it just wasn't as good as it could be. I really look forward to your re-written story and future chapters!

Fantastic story you have going on! (:

I really do hope to see an update soon; the last one left me a bit confused, yet really excited since this fic is written amazingly. :D

So I hope you update soon! ^0^

OMG !! more.. you need more chapters ! come on and get off yer lazy butt and write j/k.. not joking about writing more chapter though

so let's get it on :)

Pretty good. What's a beta reader?

I love this ff! It's so unique...making Paul have powers! lol

Hoennshipping is alright, it's kind of cute actually!

Please update soon! Looks like this hasn't been updated for a while. -despressed- lol

sci-fi and pokemon, huh? paul's confusin... but then again, when's he not? oh well, great chap! update soon - and keep up w/ the may love triangle thing!

Wow, I really liked the chapters! Can't wait to read more!

Sorry I didn't review last chapter!

Anyway, you made Hoennshipping really cute in this chapter! I'm probably one of the only Contestshipping voters who thinks that you're right for this story. And like I said, this is more on Dawn than May anyway. Hoennshipping is a nice change of pace too.

Um, what's up with psycho Paul? He's like all evil and powerful and then back to normal. He's a weirdo! And why does Dawn HAVE to travel with Weir- uh I mean Paul? Well, I guess I'll just keep reading!

Well, it was a bit of a belated update, but this chapter's wonderful quality sure made up for it. :D Beautiful language; flawless grammar; and very few typos. Only complaint I have is that the battles seem a little short... but they still seemed appropriate, IMO.

Eek! What's happened to Paul? -shudders- Ughh... I hate Riri for doing that to him... -sobs-

Loved the Hoennshipping fluff. ;D I know a lot of people will probably complain, but I want you to know that you've satisfied at least ONE person. ^__^

Please try to update soon! Oh, and have a Merry Christmas! (if you celebrate it.)

[>>Galbinus]

Ah, you updated! So...hmm...sci-fi, ne? Sounds interesting. Ganbatte with the rest of the story, ne!

good stuff plz update more this is a great story :)

Ohayo! Sorry I wasn't able to beta this chapter! But, I'm back and ready to work! So, hit me with the next chapter!

...lol, so that's a bad excuse for me to get a sneak preview of the next chapter, but W/E! *gives you cookie*

Good job! There weren't many errors, except for some spelling, but that's ok!

Is happily waiting for the next chapter. Go, Hikari, go!

oh my gosh WOW. one question, tho - why wuz she suddenly scantily clad? didn't get that... liked this chap, update soon!

:( Hoennshipping? T.T that's one of my most hated shippings ever...