I am new to but was wondering if this story will have updates or has the spark we call creativity on hold for you? I know that perfection can not be rushed but I am very interested to see where you will take the characters from here. Optomistically waiting...

Hmm. This chapter could be better explained. The 'I am a vampyre Livia' bit is a bit unclear. Does she comprehend that he's an actual bloodsucking creature of the night, or does she think he's some sort of cult member, or is she just concussed? Because then she assumes he's going to say 'man' instead of 'vampyre'. So yeah, not very clear, unless you plan to elaborate in the next chapter. In which case ignore me totally.

I patiently wait for the next chapter, as always.

please please please update soon! i absolutely LOVE your story and i'm dying to be able to read more!

Please update

Again I will say I love the intelligence. The emotional and physical description neither lacks anything nor is it overindulgent; it's balanced, allowing the reader - at least this one - to get lost in the story.

However...I must find myself back in reality because I don't want to read the chapter 7 and be left wanting for eight...even though I know that to be an inevitable circumstance when it comes to reading fanfiction. But, quality not quantity is always the deciding factor, and the cons are outweighed by the quality of your work.

Till later.

Sincerely

E.

:clap: Devilishly charming - both Livia and...well, since you left him nameless so shall I :) I love the intelligence.

Oh, I love the satire! Livia is certainly skilled in the verbal arts :D I'm rushing to the next chapter so as to see what will happen next...

Oh, what a happy family they are...not.

Well, there are definitely some allusions as to the plot - however, I'm not going to spoil them by guessing. All I'll say is I thoroughly enjoyed how this chapter was written. Hope to read more soon...once I find time :)

Till then,

E.

Intoxicating beginning to a promising story. Love your style.

- E.

your an amazing writer! i love the attitude that Livia has! i look forward to reading more!

please review. I like your story. Review? Pretty Please? With a cherry on top?

That was fiery. :D Their dialogue was brilliant, including the whole 'staked to his bed' ordeal. Loved it. Wonderful work, and I hope you update soon. You've no idea how much I love your work, and I'm counting the days for another chapter. (wink)

Thanks a whole bunch. Now I have to go fill out an application to start my second job. Damn. Oh well, that's life.

Thank you!

Anyone else think that little 'innocent woman' is a bitch for stealing her mother's chambers and bequeathing herself Mistress of the House. (Raises hand) Anyone else? Anyone?

Yeah, I'm completely on Livia's side concerning that one. Things like that irk the hell out of me.

OK, on with this wonderful story. I'm falling for its charms, drowning in your beautiful writing skill.

(bows down) :D

I kind of see where her brother is coming from, just because...uh, hello, it's Dracula. You don't say no to him. :D I'm also very suspicious as to all the details you gave away about him, like how cold he is, and how pale. (eyes widen) Could he be? (ponders) Maybe?...mmhhm

I also understand Livia (LIz...if she prefers. Heh.)'s point of view, sorta. That's why I like your stories. Not only are they written really well, but they make you think, and you end up taking in so much more than a 'smutty fanfiction porno' and actually feel like you're reading a book. You writing is amazing and I'm severely jealous of it. :D

I must continue. Kudos to you, friend.

Oh, I like this story already. Her attitude is completely badass and I love it. Not to mention the plot here, which is absolutely wicked awesome. :D

Livia is a brilliant character, and you've written out her personality really well, as you do with all of your characters, of course. And that ending...I have to keep reading before it gives me any more chills and I blow a gasket.

Great beginning chapter! I bow down at your beautiful skill and talent.

(bows down)