Totally loved it! ^.^ Even though I haven't seen this anime I could familiarise myself with the characters and could feel the depth of pain Fai was experiencing. The guilt and self hatred, the uncertainty and wistfulness for something that he is not quite sure of yet.

I liked the way you described emotions and the situations your writing draws people into the characters thoughts which is great.

I really hope you write more, I particularly liked the playfulness of Fai at the end and the wariness he had towards certain people such as not wanting others to help and to do it himself if he could.

Fai seems to have a very interesting past. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Loved it! ^.~

Gold

Aw...I love it!><
It's really, really good how you described the feelings of Fai

nice one

I can really see it happening just like that.
It was beautifully written with only a couple of spelling mistakes, but hey evryone makes them every now and then. So nothing to really complain about.
I really hope you write more KuroFai in the future.

Wow, thank you so much for writing this! You're right in saying that there needed to be more explanation... that really made me feel better, as stupid as it may sound. I loved your elaboration and interpretation of Fai (Yuui... whatever)'s thoughts and feeling, and that was really well-written. nice work!

That made so much sense. Talk about clarity. ^^
Sweet story. I loved it.

This is so cute and this is so possible it's almost real xD
I love it a lot!
Chapter 167 made me so happy ;3;
And your fic is very nicely written, and I always love fictions which can stay so in-character and clampish hehe ^^. -applause- ^-^ !

-favies-

"Only bask in the old familiarity of their words."
Yes, yes, yes. As expected from you, pure awesomeness. That chapter made me feel extrangely in love with the manga again. Kurogane's face killed all the rage TRC fandom makes me feel.
And your descriptions about what happened between they leaving Celes and Kurogane waking up fit nicely with the storyline, at least, I could see that happening.
Thank you for sharing such a good fic ♥.

every time. that punch makes me grin. fai is love to do that ^^. i doubt kuro was up to CHASING fai. perhaps LUNGING, but still very good story ^_^

kya!
*explodes*
ermm... very well-written, though you might consider having someone read over it before you post it for a few minor and common misspellings like a "two" in place of a "to" here and there, but other than that- pure perfection! Geeze, CLAMP, I know straightforward canon is asking too much with your shounen-ai couples, but would a little transitional EXPLAINING kill ya?!