Hii!!

Oh, My Man!! (huauaahauaauh) It's so perfect!

I loved it! LOVED!! L-O-V-E-D!!

^^

How brutal, how sad! I feel like something has been squeezed out of me when I finished reading this. It's so heavy, and dark.

If I could cry, I would've. (but frankly, I'm not those fangirls that would hold boxes of tissues whenever I read tragic stuff...in fact, I laugh at them...although that's just off topic, right?)

Either way, I think you've certainly made some statements in here. I thought that it was a extremely clever way to show how much Haru was actually in love with Rin. Obsessed enough to keep her all to himself, yet loving her enough to die for her. Very...deep. Makes me think what he was really trying to do here.

All in all, another wonderful fic produced by you.

Random note: Why in rated 'M'? The death might be a bit on the rougher side, but I'm sure that it wasn't that horrifying to scar kids. I think a 'T' would do real nicely.