I have to say that I hate David. *burns a picture of David* Muahahaha! Which reminds me, Picture to Burn by Taylor Swift would be a good song to use.

This is a good story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever.

good story. please post more

Oh, I just now noticed one little thing. I see that you list the characters and their ages at the top of the page. The thing is, May was 14 in chapter one, yet was 13 1/2 from chapter 2 thru chapter 8, and then was 13 3/4 in the newest chapter. Was this just an honest mistake? Don't be ashamed if it is, we all make mistakes like that.

Like I said earlier, great job, keep it up!

Wow, that was a sad chapter. I have one question: It said that May "grabbed her bag, stuck her tongue out at the closed door,
and headed toward Hoenn." Does this mean she's heading in the direction of Pallet Town, or a different route? And has she given up on her pursuit of Ash, or is she just getting started?

I look forward to the next chapter!

Stupid, stupid, evil, selfish, MAY!

Can't believe I haven't seen this before - this is fantastic! Although I'll be brutally honest - Pokeshipping is not my favorite, but I'm tolerant of it. I'm watching as the whole Advanceshipping stuff unfolds (however onesided, and yes, I'm an Advanceshipper) with interest. I feel kinda bad for her in this latest chapter. I mean, if Ash was returning her kiss, that implies he has feelings for her too. Although, it seems as though he's wanting to find Misty. I wonder which pairing shall win out?

Update soon! This is good!

Hurry!

awesome~!~

lol haha may but i think she bellongs with drew anyways sos haQ! luv ur story too

This is really good! please update soon!

Not bad, mon ami. I give it a 7 out of 10. Keep it up!

Okay start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. If you want, you can look at my stories.