goood story

Dude this story's good you have to make another chapter

I really want Naruto to turn Hinata into a vampire so please update soon

Your story is really intresting, I look foward reading it more as soon as you update. Though there is one thing that is bothering me; it seems like you rush your story, take time, wright more details it'll make your story much better. Well good luck & please update!

It's great and all but... It's going abit too fast. Naruto's personality SLOWLY goes cold and he slowly accepts. Maybe have the whowasthatvampire teach him. And it's impossible to get so thirsty DURING transformation. Maybe have a super thirst afterwards

hmmm i wonder how hinata is the cure

Dong that was werried no fight no nothing like he forgot what he said. I like what you have so far. but I thought that there would be some pain to the Bite and Changing.

Please update I really want to see some naruhina

this is the one good review replying. This is one of the first stories that I have read that is both good and actually gramatically correct, congraulations.

nice story man ,i love it you shud update it

I love this story!Write more!

beast ever in the wold. peas update rider in the wold.

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I like it, you should continue, please.

Note that when you wrote about naruto awaking in the middle of the night, it wouldn't actually be 12:00 Pm, but 12:00 am. You should treat 12's like 0's in the time chart.

that was awsome

SO COOL! i hope you decide to finish, or atleast update! that was really detailed(in my oppinion) and you totally sucked me in! can't wait for the next part! :3