I've figured out what makes your stories so beautiful! When i read them, I'm not reading. I'm seeing it. I'm feeling it. That's why I didn't notice any of the tense stuff before the fifth time. It's really wonderful. Well, not in terms of content, like 'happy' or anything. It's wonderfully written. Really. Amazing.

Love,

Lady Merlin

I loved it!

It was so sad... (

Where did you get the idea of making it?

That was good. Good but confusing. My head hurts too.

Melikes. Real tragic and angsty. Beautiful

This is vary sad but I recon thats what you were going for so you acomlished it.

I REALLY LIKE THIS! Great job Nikkisocks!

Evieshoes

Whoa. I didn't even know who was speaking until I went up and looked at the characters. It's well written and kinda creepy in a way. Good oneshot though.