|Reviews for The Heir of LeFey|
| Riniko22 2/26/12 . chapter 2
Moody in this story seems to be to Dumbledore as Wormtail is Voldemont. Wonder what Dumbledore has on him.
| PiercedAmethyst 12/31/11 . chapter 7
I love the story! But if the Potter's had family portraits, couldn't it be assumed that the other pureblood families also had them so by extension, shouldn't Sirius have a portrait?
| Hogger 11/26/11 . chapter 7
Dude, wht happ next..? ru going to finish at all..?
| anaymous 11/4/11 . chapter 7
when are you going to update the story its been more than two years come on
| Sqwishee 11/3/11 . chapter 3
They got married! Woo hoo!
| AyameRose 10/14/11 . chapter 7
well... this story is definitely interesting... i like that draco is an almost neutral presence in the story and the idea of all of these old men acting like chess masters and moving pawns around like it is nothing... brava on a VERY original (from what i personally have read) storyline and setup though i wonder if you were planing on continuing or will this hiatus be more permanent?
| Ravenclaw Slytherin 10/14/11 . chapter 7
I like your story! Update soon!
| Therio 10/10/11 . chapter 7
It really is too bad that you disappeared before finishing this trilogy. It was really a masterpiece.
| The Dark Lord Potter 10/8/11 . chapter 7
is this fine work ever getting updated?
| Neville'sEcotopia 9/11/11 . chapter 6
Hmm... I can't help but think that LeFey's heir is either Draco or Hermione. However, we don't know all the details about the heritage of the others very well. Considering you've changed the past of several characters, I wouldn't put it past you to change any of the others. I can't help but assume that Harry is supposed to be the heir to Merlin by the way you're making it appear. But the Weasley thing just throws that off. But only if bloodlines really do matter. How is it possible for Voldemort to communicate with the pensieve? I was under the impression that it only held memories, not someone's personality or soul. Is Albus' son actually dead, or dead in the sense of Voldemort soul-splitting /barely alive?
On a different note, I'm not sure about which is actually meddling for the better, Dumbledore and/or Lazarus. Lazarus could actually be the bad guy instead of Dumbledore. But we won't know until you write more!
| Paperclipgail1728 9/7/11 . chapter 7
Wow. Awesome plot. Amazing characters. Wow.
Will it be continued?
| Guest 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Update, you bloody prick!
| WitchOfDarkness13 8/30/11 . chapter 7
I wonder how the fight between Malfoy and Fernir is going to go? Hopefully we can find out soon if you are still updating.
| Gerrendus 7/29/11 . chapter 7
Great story so far. I read the first one too but waited to review till I got here. It looks like it's been a while but I hope you pick it back up at some point in time in the future.
| ryu-no-kitsune 7/20/11 . chapter 7
so far i can say i am in love with this story and the other heir stop u have done i cant wait to read the rest and i like how u made this seem like a real book. keep it up