applause! YAY!
I don't think the ending was weird at all. By the way, can I have David's phone number? LOL!
Love Muchly, Hadassah

I LURVE IT! Update, update, update!

"Collins smiled into the kiss; they’d soon learn why he’d been kicked out of MIT." -SQUEE!

Squat and Kumquat,
Panda

*gets cookie...steals another* Yay! This is really good! Very, very cute. =D

Very cute! Just a few suggestions, though.

First of all, maybe Collins shouldn't continuously call Angel "Angelcake", it gets old. Perhaps you should only put it in once in awhile.

Also, I think Angel would've been a bit more fierce to the attackers than she was in your story, but if that's your impression of her, then forget what I said.

I think you should probably use another word other than ** ALL the time, because it gets really repetitive. Ashlee's a bit over-the-top too.

I hope I've helped, and I'm putting this story on alert!

Go Katherine! The OCs just get better and better...I can't WAIT for Collins to pull an MIT!

Cute!

*accepts cookie happily*

Too cute.

TOO TOO CUTE.

Love it.

Oh, this is gonna be good...

J'adore David!! Seriously, he's the coolest. Good chapter!

Omg, I

Poor Angel...

YAY!

Alex bashing!

YAY!

WOO! *murders Alex again* YAY!

And David is funny...where the heck did you get David Hoff from?

Poor Angel! *hugs Angel*

COLLINS TO THE RESCUE!

;)

I like David!

Those motherf#ckers! How dare they hurt Angel?!?!

*attacks them with a chainsaw!*

At least the chapter had a cute, happy ending! :D

Great job! I love how Collins came to the rescue! Love the fast update also. Can't wait to see whats up next.