Very funny, confusing, but funny

McDonalds in a BoF2 story?

"I must say, they are quite huge."

"Really? You think so? Cool!"

Good stuff, man. And to think you've only gotten seven reviews (including mine) for this. That's just a shame! Where are all the readers when you need them? Okay, time to get serious.

This was a pretty enjoyable story. You matched the character of Jean perfectly. I didn't like him much in the game, but he was quite a riot in this story. All the other characters fit themselves perfectly, too. It's quite commendable. In addition to how you did Jean, I also liked your portrayal of Sten and Katt. Nice stuff. Seemed almost like a real side-quest in the game.

That part where they first enter the ship was great. I couldn't help but imagine that scene playing out in a 16 bit fashion. Odd, I know. Yeah.

The scene with the Quaker Life Cereal was awesome. That part actually made me laugh, especially when the security drone came in and pitched it's two cents.

I noticed that this story got a little "adult" at times, too. Pretty interesting, I must say. If what you said about Spar was in the game, I totally missed it. Oh, well. I found the scene in which Katt "helps" Rand get back his will to fight to be quite memorable, so to speak.

Okay, now to wrap this all up. I hope you get some more reviews for this soon. Good story. Clever. Enjoyable. Amusing. Alluring. Intriguing.

Take it easy.

Keep on writing.

WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE TO SPAR! HE IS MY FAVEAROTE CHARACTER AND YOU TURNED HIM INTO A FREAK! but apart from turning Spar into a freak the story is VERY good _

hoo! You are *quite* a little nut, aren't you? I luv you for it, though. You're a pervert, too, hmm? Ah, should have left Nina with the aliens... she fit in better. _ Yay Katt! Hehe. Anyway...

Ecchi! ;P But, quite good... those commercial breaks were a bit uneccessary IMO, but over all, good fic.

Thumbs up, sir. Kept me laughing all the way.

Eh? Why COMPLETE? Oh well, at least it's done! Great fic.

Hey! I'm glad to see you've finished it! That was great ending, and I especially liked it when Rand went nuts, because he could never have Katt.

I found the Nina and that perverted little alien thing to be a little disburbing though. I've noticed how you tend not to be particularly kind to her in your fics, and I don't like that at all.