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smee13
2008-06-04
ch 3,
abuseTHAT WAS AWESOME! absolutely loved the carbonated holy water trick! YAY ASH LIVES ON! thanx muchly 4 that i loved it
Goddess972
2007-10-18
ch 3,
abuseIncredible & one of the most unique take on the events in All Hell Breaks Loose. I haven't seen this pov of view before. You really got into Ash's & Ellen's heads & you portrayed them both brilliantly, which is particularly incredible considering they were minor-ish characters & didn't get as much screen time. Your conversations were true and real and I could picture what was going on. I absolutely love Ellen in this!! You wrote the chaos and violence of situation outstanding! It was awesome & I loved it & I thoroughly enjoyed this story!
Rebel Goddess
2007-10-01
ch 3,
abuseEllen is so fantastically tough. It's great to read. Poor Ted, getting nailed by his friend. The body count rose and it made a very exciting read. Wonderful story. More of these please.
Rebel Goddess
2007-10-01
ch 2,
abuseI grinned and grinned and grinned at the holy water coming out of the carbonated drinks taps. Love this. I also love the way Ash is so bad at poker and they're all terrified. Great stuff.
Rebel Goddess
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseLOL at Ash. Good beginning. I like the new points of view on what we should have seen in an otherwise excellent set of episodes.
irismay42
2007-10-01
ch 3,
abuseThat was fabulous - complete adrenalin rush all the way! I like the idea of Ellen being complicit in blowing up the Roadhouse - in order to stop it being used as a trap for unwitting hunters. And her thoughts when Lucy was dying about just being glad it wasn't Jo...heartbreakingly true to life I think.

Good stuff! Glad you finished it!
Savage Shade
2007-10-01
ch 3,
abuseI like your version better than Kripke's, Ash got out and a good brawl makes anything better. Good work.
Ghostwriter
2007-10-01
ch 3,
abuseHey, better than the 'dumb luck' stuff. Suits Ellen and Ash MUCH better. Catch ya on the flip side.
supergirl3684
2007-09-30
ch 3,
abusethat was great!! Great job!!
clclemmons
2007-09-30
ch 3,
abuseBloody hell, that was awesome!
Mirriam Q Webster
2007-09-30
ch 3,
abuseAbsolutely Brilliant! I liked this even better than the show! I am absolutely astounded. This was definitely a well-told tale. I am in awe. Completely. Love it.
historylover
2007-09-30
ch 3,
abuseI hope it went down like that! I hated that Kripke killed off Ash, so I really hope it went down like that and that Ash is alive!

Kat
irismay42
2007-09-30
ch 2,
abuseYou just ramped up the tension superbly in that chapter, right up until the doosie of a cliffhanger at the end! I loved how you gave all the faceless hunters who we only really saw as corpses (or not at all!) in AHBL1 faces and names - made it all a little bit more personal, rather than just thinking, Oh no, Ash died! or Oh thank god, Ellen's alive!

Great stuff!
Mirriam Q Webster
2007-09-30
ch 2,
abuseBeautiful. Absolutely beautiful. That was an amazing set up. And I love the sticky carbonated holy water. I'm a little curious why Ellen spilled water twice, though. To get a holy water-soaked bar towel? Could be useful, I suppose, in a bar full of demons.
I can't get over how exciting this is. That Tarot card reading was perfect, even for people like me who don't know a lot about how to interpret the cards. I can't wait to see the conclusion.
Sphynxcat
2007-09-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseAll right - ready to rumble - but not an Ellen fan I see. Still who cares - this is more fun than I've ever had at Harvelle's before. Whoo-hoo!
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