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| smee13 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseTHAT WAS AWESOME! absolutely loved the carbonated holy water trick! YAY ASH LIVES ON! thanx muchly 4 that i loved it |
| Goddess972 2007-10-18 ch 3, | abuseIncredible & one of the most unique take on the events in All Hell Breaks Loose. I haven't seen this pov of view before. You really got into Ash's & Ellen's heads & you portrayed them both brilliantly, which is particularly incredible considering they were minor-ish characters & didn't get as much screen time. Your conversations were true and real and I could picture what was going on. I absolutely love Ellen in this!! You wrote the chaos and violence of situation outstanding! It was awesome & I loved it & I thoroughly enjoyed this story! |
| Rebel Goddess 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseEllen is so fantastically tough. It's great to read. Poor Ted, getting nailed by his friend. The body count rose and it made a very exciting read. Wonderful story. More of these please. |
| Rebel Goddess 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseI grinned and grinned and grinned at the holy water coming out of the carbonated drinks taps. Love this. I also love the way Ash is so bad at poker and they're all terrified. Great stuff. |
| Rebel Goddess 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL at Ash. Good beginning. I like the new points of view on what we should have seen in an otherwise excellent set of episodes. |
| irismay42 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseThat was fabulous - complete adrenalin rush all the way! I like the idea of Ellen being complicit in blowing up the Roadhouse - in order to stop it being used as a trap for unwitting hunters. And her thoughts when Lucy was dying about just being glad it wasn't Jo...heartbreakingly true to life I think. Good stuff! Glad you finished it! |
| Savage Shade 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseI like your version better than Kripke's, Ash got out and a good brawl makes anything better. Good work. |
| Ghostwriter 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseHey, better than the 'dumb luck' stuff. Suits Ellen and Ash MUCH better. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| supergirl3684 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abusethat was great!! Great job!! |
| clclemmons 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abuseBloody hell, that was awesome! |
| Mirriam Q Webster 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abuseAbsolutely Brilliant! I liked this even better than the show! I am absolutely astounded. This was definitely a well-told tale. I am in awe. Completely. Love it. |
| historylover 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abuseI hope it went down like that! I hated that Kripke killed off Ash, so I really hope it went down like that and that Ash is alive! Kat |
| irismay42 2007-09-30 ch 2, | abuseYou just ramped up the tension superbly in that chapter, right up until the doosie of a cliffhanger at the end! I loved how you gave all the faceless hunters who we only really saw as corpses (or not at all!) in AHBL1 faces and names - made it all a little bit more personal, rather than just thinking, Oh no, Ash died! or Oh thank god, Ellen's alive! Great stuff! |
| Mirriam Q Webster 2007-09-30 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful. Absolutely beautiful. That was an amazing set up. And I love the sticky carbonated holy water. I'm a little curious why Ellen spilled water twice, though. To get a holy water-soaked bar towel? Could be useful, I suppose, in a bar full of demons. I can't get over how exciting this is. That Tarot card reading was perfect, even for people like me who don't know a lot about how to interpret the cards. I can't wait to see the conclusion. |
| Sphynxcat 2007-09-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseAll right - ready to rumble - but not an Ellen fan I see. Still who cares - this is more fun than I've ever had at Harvelle's before. Whoo-hoo! |