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boo
2009-09-01 . chapter 4
Poor Shikamaru and his too red car.

Did I tell you make me laugh? :)

-boo
boo
2009-09-01 . chapter 3
He actually got a great shot of me with whipped cream all over my mouth, choking on a slice of cake. Ino wants to frame it. I love you too, I say to her.

FAVOURITE LINES EVER.

I laughed hard.

Great job. :D

-zanibarr
boo
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
This first chapter made me laugh.

Nice job.
nanamisakurachan
2009-07-23 . chapter 12
aw that was so sweet! I'm glad i read it xD

ty ty ty for writing it :)
Merridaine
2009-07-20 . chapter 12
Such a good ending! Really lovely last line!
Oxymoron Princess
2009-02-19 . chapter 12
YOU, are a pure genius(excluding the almost shower rape-not pure- that i bet would have been Über hot) Can't wait to read your other stories! Bye!
Un!sawr
2009-01-05 . chapter 12
I'm kinda surprised that this ficcy doesn't have more reviews.
The way you put this whole story in a diary-form/each person's POV was completely ingenious.
You really went in depth with each character, and showed how each of them weren't perfect with their perfect lives/families, that they had their own share of problems.
Not completely cliche either, like I see how in most stories Naruto would accept Hinata's offer without hesitation. But here, you have him declining but for his own reasons (which brings me to the point of how I like how you incorporate d their background history from the original series into this AU world).
And even though Sakura is usually portrayed as a goody-two-shoes, you made her realistic. What, with how you made her take part in those 'night activities' to deal with her problems. Even though I don't like the image--it's character development..?
And Sasuke was more mysterioues, secretive, & cryptic than usual. Not only were the characters in the story interested to unravel his thoughts, but the readers as well.
And I just love your wording/metaphor-ing in this, like how Ino (that girl sure knows how to play on words) described themselves as animals during the lunch scene. Very nice scene btw, and her phone convo. with Sasu-chan about the nail-polish was pretty entertaining as well.
You even had the element of suspense in here, especially with the scene with the returning of 'Mikoto'. Didn't see that coming (referring to the end of that mystery).
But I think I should stop here before I start rambling, your story really makes me want to keep a diary now. Though I cannot, for that is too risky. Plus I doubt it'd be as exciting as the ones I've read here.
khorol26
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
lurvs da story! :D
it inspired me to keep a diary :3
iUchibi
2008-12-26 . chapter 12
Oh my edward Cullen I just spent a whole night reading this on my little itouch. And for oh my freakin sure it was worth it. I loved the suspense and the mystery that leaves you hanging on for the next chapter, mixed in with the romance! Thank you for such a good read.
sonia
2008-12-05 . chapter 12
Thank you for a wonderful story!
Love the ending and love that Sasuke kinda become a normal young man that talk (a lot more), laugh and show emotions...
I like it!

Write more about this couple (SasuSaku)!
sonia
2008-12-05 . chapter 11
why??! Why?! you are making Sakura like a **?! I s she really sleeping with guys??...
Just a little disappointed about Sakura's behavior...Anyway, story is good... Will continue
sonia
2008-12-05 . chapter 6
Interesting story this one, but liking it!
I am glad at least Sasuke has family and friends outside school, I mean, its good you didn't portray him as an orphan (or the whole clan died)... Something a little different is good...
I will continue again
and Thank you! (for the story)
3xpinupgirl
2008-11-22 . chapter 12
I love this story!
Invisible fluffy pink unicorn
2008-11-11 . chapter 12
I'm such a lame review, but here goes.

I LOVE this story. I never really thought about it much after reading, no devouring, it a day ago. But a day after it kinda just clicked. I loved this story. I loved how it started so simple and weaved into something complex. Hahaha.

Thanks for writing. :)
smooth.stutter
2008-10-24 . chapter 12
i really liked -no loved, this.
:) xx
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