the first thing i said was "omg... THAT WAS A DAMN GOOD POEM!"

lol


and i meant it

THAT WAS SO CUTE! BROTHERLY LOVE! YOU'RE REALLY A GREAT WRITER!

hm damn it this one made me feel a lot more lonlier than before thats how love goes i didnt really care if u didnt understand my fic and all just tell what i need to do so that i could improve it and yeah your fic's/poetry is pretty good yet scary

god, i love your writing so much!
and i certainly love it as much as you loved writing it!

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I really loved it like i love your stories based on this poem. Good job!

nicely written! well expressed. loved it. i do wonder why u are so attached to the subject matter of incest lol but its gud either way! keep up the great work!

Very nice alternate rendition.

It seems that it lent itself quite well to that form.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

This is so sad...but very well written ^^ I like it. Is this going to end here? Because it would seem a very perfect ending, but you could also make a fic...so was just wondering.

W00t! You're back! Keep up the poetry and updates! ^-^
- AnonymousM (Sakura- Hime of the Unbreakable Trio)

ho! ho! ho! so you not only have the talent for making wonderful stories but for making amazing poetry too, eh? great job! :)