WOW...just wow... Saturn and Pluto seem closer than a mother/daughter relationship would suggest. What is with Saturn acting nice than nasty to Pluto and she's just taking it calmly?! Also maybe have a few more hints as to the connection they have with each other. But overall (cues drumroll) we have a future Tolkins in the making. Am awaiting chapter 11
*stares avidly at screen amid confusion of dogs and family members*

Glad to see you back, if only momentary. Really glad you went to touch base with this part of the story. As always, looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow! I have to say: FANTASTIC job! This was a really high quality chapter, and I REALLY hope you continue to do more great chapters in the future! Please continue to feed the gnawing hunger we all have for quality fanfics ^_^

nice to see you again

Great Chapter

Um. I felt I just had to review this, but now I don't know what to say. So. Um.

I love it, there's nothing better I can think of to say at the moment. I love how you write Pluto and Queen Serenity, but most of all, I adore this idea of Saturn as ... oh, whatever you could call her.

"“Why do I hate them?” Saturn dropped to her knees. “Tell me! Why do I hate them so much? Why does one part of me want to tear them limb from limb while the rest of me doesn’t ever want to see them hurt?”

And at last Pluto understood and the understanding took her breath away."

I think my heart broke, I honestly do. How on earth do I go back to writing my own fic now, hey? If I could write a fanfic of this, I would - it's almost everything I've ever looked for in a fic.

Anyway. I'm in love in case you couldn't tell and will wait very, very eagerly for an update. Can't promise I'll review reguarly because I'm bad like that, but definitely expect more reviews if that motivates you at all. XD

Thank you!

x Maz x

I'm glad I found this story. Not a lot of people can pull this kind of thing off and I'm glad to be reading a story by an author who can. I especially like the potrayal of Serenity, who was always thought of as an infinately benevolant queen. I like how you were able to realistically mold her into a more manipulative and dictator-like ruler. Keep up the good work.

I really like this story! I hope you inspiration keeps you writing as I want to know what else will be coming and just what did Pluto offer Saturn for exchange for her help.

This is a remarkable story!Very happy I found it. Hope you can update soon, I'm very intrigued by what's going on.Love how you're keeping everyone in character, exploring Saturn's (and the Moon Kingdom's) dark past and weaving suspense with these switches between past and present! Can barely wait for the next chapter:)

Thank you for sharing this lovely story.
Myosotis

Wow! I have to say this is some fanfic! The darkness of this story and Saturn in general is amazing! It's not often I get to enjoy a well made dark fanfic about Saturn or the Silver Millenium! Continue with the great work ^_^

GREAT STORY! Love Pluto and Saturn. DONT like Serenity though...

AMAZING STORY SO FAR

so much Mystery...So much drama...superb.

great job

Yea! Continuation! The inner-conflict Saturn is facing here is quite moving. Can't wait to see what it is that she remembered.