Reviews for Picking up the Pieces

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AliasCSINYFriendsER 2008-08-06 ch 6,	abuseAW! I love this story. I'm sorry that I've been so behind in reading!! :-p LOVE IT! More soon! ~mandi _
magic-munchies 2008-07-24 ch 6,	abuseHey I remember this story :P Loved the chapter hun! Keep it up
Ze'eva Shacklebolt 2008-07-23 ch 6,	abuseHey, I just wanted to point out that when Mac says “He only lost 15 of himself, and he died. When Claire died, I lost at least 50 of my life" it should be 15 % and 50 %, it's a bit hard to lose 15 or 50 of yourself.
Bonasera 2008-07-22 ch 6,	abuselooved this chapter=) soo soo sweet end =) im looking forward too more=)
Lionessmon 2008-07-22 ch 6,	abuseI missed you. Hard luck on the Gary meeting, it will happen sometime. I am looking forward to reading your chaps and getting loads of review replies. Post soon
shopping-luva91 2008-07-22 ch 6,	abuseOMG THAT WAS SO GORGEOUS! I love this story! Can't wait for more! Seriously. Lol. Everyday when I come home and check my emails and theres an update of yours I squeal so much lol. Great work! (as always) xx
kaidiii 2008-07-22 ch 6,	abuseWonderful chapter.Good Stella never give up Mac.
Queen Em 2008-07-21 ch 5,	abuseI haven't actually seen that ep, but I certainly like what you have written. I really felt the desperation Stella had and of course Mac protected her. The song fitted in so well, a really lovely story x
Queen Em 2008-07-21 ch 3,	abuseOh I love these!! That line at the end "more than late" was fantastic and I liked how it wrapped in with Stella's thoughts at the begining and how this time they definetely won't be going into work unlike last time where she couldn;t resist! Stella's thoughts at the start were very funny and I think ths is my favourite one so far! x
Queen Em 2008-07-21 ch 2,	abuseHe he! That was so powerful yet rather naughty! It was really clever how you showed Mac looking after Stella this time and how he always wants to make sure she is ok and even when she was very happy in the shower wink wink he was still concerned! The end was very sweet! I LOVE this! x
Queen Em 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseWhy have I not seen this before?! I love this idea, Smacked oneshots that are well written are always fab to read, and this one certianly is well written. I liked how you showed Mac as being lost and Stella knowing what to do and them realizing they need each other. I am going to read some more, but not on the eps I haven;t seen so if I miss a few out its just because I havent seen the ep. Anyway, I will review again in a minute!! x
Lost in New York 2008-07-21 ch 6,	abuseI just read all chapters of Picking up the Pieces and liked it very much. I think it's a brilliant idea write a story of every episode. I hope you write more:)
shawdoo 2008-07-21 ch 6,	abuseIm so happy you're updating this fic! I love how Stella can break through Mac's defences no matter how hard he tries to stop her. You have such a great understanding of the characters. Sadly I don't have any ideas for "Rain". Sorry. I hope you'll be updating again soon - whatever the ep you choose to do.
lily moonlight 2008-07-21 ch 6,	abuseHappy to review :) Hope you had fun in Scotland meeting other sheep XD And what a shame about Gary :( I really enjoyed your chapter; I haven't seen the episode, neither have I seen 'Rain' so can't really comment on that, but I'm happy with updates regardless of which episode they come from :) I loved this, and how you told it from Mac's POV, it worked really well. Loved too Stella coming to his apartment and the little thing about the shower which becomes a much more significant moment. Can't wait for more!
shopping-luva91 2008-04-24 ch 5,	abuseooh! I'm loving it! Great writing! Keep up the good work and please update soon! xx

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