 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 10I'm truly sadden that this story arc is over... I thank you for such an marvelous journey you have taken me on.
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 9Nice court scene, came across very professional. Sadden to see this story is almost at an end.
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 8The PTB's really love hurting mortals for their own amusement. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 7What interesting character you come up with and the depth the new characters have upon introduction is truly outstanding!
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 6Damn bloody cute and romantic... nasty ending though!
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 5Very cute family chapter, came across as REAL.
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 4Really loving this story, just love how you write the characters and little dramas you have going on in their lives.
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 3Damn good chapter and love how well you got the tension across plus again your writing really does make the characters come alive!
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 2I do believe there are interesting times ahead! Great chapter.
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 Wispr 2008-11-27 . chapter 1Now that's one sure is a captivating way to start of a new story!
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 Mistique Four 2008-05-18 . chapter 10Loved the story, too bad that it had to come to an end. |
 Knight of Discord 2008-05-07 . chapter 10Bravo, wonderful story. |
 NeverTooOld 2008-05-04 . chapter 10Thanks for some wonderful stories. I just read your entire selection today. I would have to say that they were excellent entertainment and I am looking forward to more of your work. The Visitor series was fun to read as we got to see snapshots of the Nana's lives as well as the evolution of Junior's and Mim-Jay's relationship |
 Big Ace 1 2008-05-03 . chapter 10Dear Author
I LIKE this one, and I do hope that you might conseder Keeping the Ron and Lencey storyline as a bases for a new story/series.
And do continue this one as well, Where does the Baby in the Dream originate?-adopted?,artificial insimination?,or another
non biolgical meathod?. Hm! How did they dood that?
Please keep up the good work.
Thank you for your time Big Ace 1 |
 kjmarie 2008-04-03 . chapter 10It really sad that this is the last story of the trilogy...Come on everyone want to know what happens to them next. PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING ELSE. I really hope you start writing again...This is the best story EVER! |