Bloody great story! The perfect balance between comedy and romance. I was laughing all the way through, and I found the story to very engaging.

Do keep up the good work. This is definately one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've read.

Great! I laughed rather hard while reading this last chapter, like when Hermione compares her life to this very story or when Ron comments on how Harry touched everything just when the others are quite - especially as something like that happened to all of us at least once, right? xD
Anyway, it's a really great story and I found myself really feeling with the characters. They are well crafted and the way you describe everything really had me reading nonstop.
Thank you!

Woah, I laughed so hard... McGonagall giving Hermione the Talk XDD

I'm so suffering along with them :D Good job so far!

Why did Harry buy a Nimbus two thousand and three in chapter 5 even though he owns a Firebolt? (At least that's what Hermione says what he did while she bought the cloth and the glue.)

wow this was really good. i liked the ending. twas funny.

lovely story and I laughed at the end scene

Nice battle

Remember that they didn't get their OWL results until halfway through summer after taking them? Well OWLS are the equivalent to the Muggle O-lavels and in England, those results come mid summer.
Likewise, results for A-levels, the Muggle equivalent for NEWTS, come mid summer.
So how can they graduate at the end of term when they don't even know if they've passed anything yet?
That's why neither Hogwarts, nor English schools, on which the educational system at Hogwarts was based, have graduations. JKR would have mentioned it at least once if it existed, after all at least Percy would have graduated.
Sadly graduation is just an just forcing American culture onto Harry Potter.

Nice twisty cliffhanger at the end though

I assume Luna meant the GROUND floor, not the first floor. A British first floor is what Americans call the second floor.

I just had to laugh at Ron in this one

So Harry's finally figured it out. Only took him a few? chapters haha

You sure Ella wasn't in Slytherin?

Actually, you could do with a brit/picker as well. "Fanny" in Britain means ** so nobody is going to have a fanny pack (they're called bum-bags)

We don't say candies, we say sweets and there are a lot of other things through the story. (I just hope you don't go on to do the classic bit of Americanisation and give them a graduation - Hogwarts is based on the English school system and there-s no such thing as a school graduation.)

I had to laugh at the "I'm used to it". That was always my line when my late wife used to apologise for being bad tempered with me