I really liked this fic. Congrats on the excellent portrayal and general sweetness of it all! :D

I loved the interplay between Yuki and Sensei. At firstm I admit, I thought it was Kitazawa, but once I realized who he was talking to, I could let go and enjoy the story fully.

I really liked how it came across.

Good job.

EIRI-CHICK

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Everything in this story... I love it.

The characters as just so very in-character! This is an excellent interpretation for what Yuki could have been thinking during this scene. Heck, I wish they had gone ahead and copied this from you It's that good!

The mini conversations between Yuki and sensei... they made me giggle! However, I had a hard time realizing in the very beginning that he meant his psychiatrist, and not Kitazawa... who is also referred to as "sensei" in the series. It became obvious fairly quickly, but the first few uses of the term made my head spin... "Sensei keeps telling me..." I wondered just how tired Yuki was, if he was talking to a dead guy... xD

You are quickly becoming one of my favorite Gravitation fan-fiction authors.

The word that seems to pop into my head to describe this is "delightful". It was a lighter story than the two previous ones I've read from you, but it still maintained a certain depth, not to mention it brought out quite a few laughs and eye rolls to go with some of the (well-) depicted character traits. Another enjoyable read; I'm looking forward to the others Ja ne!

aw loved this so cute and you did a good job showing yuki's thoughts and such

This is very well done! You captured Yuki's personality perfecty! I love the idea of Shuichi becoming more mature and I absolutely LOVE your writing!

Oh! I liked it! To me you got Yuki's personality really well. The way you had him talk to his therepist was great too, i think you protrayed every charater just right. Nice story!

That was amazing... Yuki's osychiatrist, especially, was awesome. Good job:P

ps Whenever, I read a good fic I start hating Yuki. It's a curse... Anyway, great job!

Great story. I have to look for your other works.

That was intriguing. It was rather descriptive and the fact that you have Yuki having inner battles with relation to Shuichi was pretty good. Keep up the good writing. :)

That was very good... I liked it so much ! It was so... Yuki-like to talk to himself like this, and try to analyse his feelings and his behaviour towards his lover. It was cute and true at the same. And very well written ! I didn't found any mistakes (not that I did look for them... lol) and their were some funny puns (if I can call it pun). Sorry, it's hard for me to describe it but anyway, your story made smile and now I'm happy for the day !

I have a proposition for you : I'm French (and bilingual, that's why I read lots of Gravi stuff) and I'd like to translate this story. I've already translated some one-shots, like NariNari's "100 ways to annoy Yuki"... But before I can begin with the translation, I need your agreement. Of course, I will credit you as the original author of the story ! Just tell me what you think about it.

Patchan.

Um, do I really need to tell you that you're amazing?

'Cause you are.

But you should know that by now.

I'm not quite sure what to say, 'cause the whole thing kinda rendered me speechless. Have you ever gotten chills, like in the back of your head and up and down your spine, while reading something? Yeah. That's what happened to me.

You're writing is so -awesome-.

I love your ability to create gentle, quiet moments. They're goregous and splendid I just feel so serene while reading your stuff! Like floating on a cloud...

Ah, I need sleep. Er. This is getting long! I think that there may have been a few hardly-noticeable moments where Eiri sounded a teensy bit feminine but, seriously...this was FLAWLESS.

You are -so- amazing.

And that's one of my favorite anime scenes, too, so this made me very happy. ;D

I really loved this. I like it when an good writer can get inside Yuki's head like that. Great moment at the end with Yuki's head in Shu's lap. Silence is golden and so is this fic. :D