Reviews for A Storm of Certainty

Reviews For: A Storm of Certainty

mulberry16 2008-06-15 ch 8,	abuseHello! I am a long time fan of Ballyk (1st three series particularly) but haven't been keeping up to date with fan fic recently so have only just found this. I love it! Have really enjoyed reading and immersing myself once again in Peter and Assumpta. I really like how you interspersed the real dialogue of some episodes with your alternative view of how things should have worked out for them. I noticed a few spelling errors along the way but nothing major. I also like the fact that you have kept Peter true to his character and they have not yet slept together in the biblical sense of the word. :D I do think he would have wanted to wait. One minor minor criticism and its prob only me who this grates on... But IMHO, by the end of ch8 (is that your last or is there more to come?) I think the "we're going to have to stop kissing now" convos are a little overdone. Either have them give into temptation, or go that wee bit too far, or skip over the discussions they have when pulling away from each other. Do you get what I mean? If they have made their decision to wait then they don't need to keep discussing it, they know each other well enough for it to be left unsaid. Anyway, well done! I look forward to reading more of your work.
catwoman 2007-12-16 ch 8, anon.	abusepeter and assumpta are both young, gorgeous and healthy- vows or not, they would be together by now but the story is lovely and fun-- only wish the real actors could have stayed together- he (ST) must look at all these video clips and pictures and think, what have I done, letting that beautiful woman out of my life-- will keep checking for the next chapter- the fanfiction is wonderful, better than the show writing was with the killjoys who couldn't allow Assumpta and Peter to be together.
SwissMiss1 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseJust found this. :D I like how you mix parts of real episodes with your own material. I also like the poem.
star jelly 2007-11-06 ch 8,	abuseI really loved this chapter the way you did the food fair and came up with a good reason to get Assumpta out of the bar
star jelly 2007-10-21 ch 7,	abuseWow this is really good You have the characters voices down it's a little scary but very good
catofimpossiblecolour 2007-10-02 ch 4,	abuseOoh, I liked this chapter. Your "voices" are getting better with each one.
catofimpossiblecolour 2007-10-01 ch 3,	abuseI wish the series had gone this way instead of t'other. It's very believable. Maybe we can build a magic time ray, go back in time, dose the series writers with sleeping pills and hijack their notes. What do you say?
catofimpossiblecolour 2007-09-29 ch 2,	abuseAww, how romantic! You're doing a great job with the Irish accents, it keeps the flow very smooth.
catofimpossiblecolour 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseCliffhanger! How evil. I'm looking forward to reading the next bit.

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