Reviews for Castles in the Sky

Reviews For: Castles in the Sky - Reviews: Page 1 of 53

oldman543 2008-05-31 ch 31,	abusepretty good. i enjoyed it.
FarrahK 2008-05-28 ch 31, anon.	abuseY’know, this is not the first story I have read that goes over 20 chapters. Phew. I had read all 31 chapters at home before digging my head, and pensive thoughts, into this big psychology book- it isn’t funny. Mah! I am beginning to become familiar with Stargate: Atlantis. As an Aussie, from the wonderful Far North, Cairns (and you probably don’t know where that is LOL), my first liking of Stargate was SG1 and I adored Colonel Jack O’Neil. Sadly, that show has long passed, and now Stargate: Atlantis takes over with another new favourite character whom I have quickly cherished: John Sheppard, only because his demeanour is much like Jack O’Neil’s. And the first story I read when coming to adore Stargate Atlantis, regarding John Sheppard, is yours. I laughed, I silently cried (in my room), and I cheered and sneered and hugged myself (so lame); I even babbled about this story to my twin sister (who is familiar with this show) but probably does not show obession with it as I do. Still, she listens. Anyawy, I agree with you about the spelling-rules-of-thumb-thing; all the stuffing up with paragraphs is often the site's fault for not structuring out the document properly. The italics does not go italic and everything usually does not go as premeditated. However, some moronic fools do not take that into consideration. Uh, moving right along: we are not born with this craft. We come to know it. I know you have uploaded this story many months, or a year, ago, but….I just wanted to review and let you know that this will be on my favourite’s list. Your writing and descriptive words astounded me and I do hope you make another Sheppard story like this. Well, not ‘exactly’ like this. I’ll be the (slowest) person to catch up in reading it. In the meantime, catch you later calculator.
Haruka83 2008-05-23 ch 31,	abuseThank you very much than great history I have read it several times, This story was the best Sheppard whump I have read I am delightful for everybody as you managed Sheppard's Psyche, you did it very well Without the need of finish them technicians I laughed, I cried, I got angry and I thought about something, I cried, I shrunk back in fear, mentally I felt a great sadness for Sheppard it was to submitted and that at the end I achieve, all the torture to surpass it with his friends's help One more time a great work, great story and my congratulations and a great ending MORE SHEP WHUMP XDD :)
Haruka83 2008-05-07 ch 25,	abuseOH my god this story is really incredibleThis story was the best Sheppard whump I have read in a long time. it's addictive I read it in two days, I laughed, cried, got angry, got revenge, cheered, cried more, set back and thought about some things, cried, cringed, mentally kicked butt with Sheppard,This story and you are defintely going in my favorites list. I cannot thank you enough. I can't imagine that it passed between john the queen and Ki'vana ah please continued this story is fantastic a piece of art PSD;please update soon T_T I need to know that it happens to sheppard the Queen Ki'vana and the team shep My qualification od one to ten TEN congratulations XDD
Haruka83 2008-05-05 ch 26,	abusegreat story, a good piece of art, I wait the end XDD
inthisdarcness 2008-04-04 ch 31,	abuseWow... This was an entirely too good piece! I read it all between last night and this morning and subsequently avoided finishing a paper for my English class, but that's all right I just skipped another lecture and did it then instead, lol. Anywho, the story was VERY well written. I've read quite a few of you older works, though, I've been to lazy to leave reviews sweatdrop and I loved them all, especially Sherbet. i just wanted to drop you a line to say awesome job and keep 'em coming! Thanks! Tiana
T're Urvawi 2008-03-26 ch 31,	abuseTruely remarkable. Loved it. :) This was a rollercoster of emotions and events. I love how you made it all fit together flawlessly. ^_^ Fantastic ~T're
Wraith Fan 2008-03-26 ch 31, anon.	abuseI just finished reading,this is the greatest story ever!is there gonna be a sequel to it?you can never be sure when a wraith queen is truly dead lol!
Wraith Fan 2008-03-25 ch 25, anon.	abuseGreat story, but I read the first part of this at Wraith Bait and there the story doesn't have all the chapters yet,so maybe you could put the rest of the story there too. Really a good story!
camuns2 2008-03-18 ch 31, anon.	abuseI loved your story. I read the hole story at once. It is the best Sheppard whump story I read so far.
shiloh42 2008-03-15 ch 30,	abuseI just want to echo everyone else - this is your masterpiece (at least, so far). What a wonderful, moving, emotionally wrenching story. You are so skilled in perflectly capturing the character's voices and personalities. Your whump is powerful and haunting. I also adore your clever turns of phrase, and descriptions "...like a geek remake of The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly". I adore that about your writing! Just one little note regarding the carping you've gotten on the handful of typos. First off, forget the complainers. From what I've noticed, 99% of the words are the ones that spellcheck will not catch. I do technical writing (manuals and policy books, that sort of thing), and I know from personal experience how hard it is to catch properly spelled but mis-used works (they're vs their vs there), especially in your own work. The brain corrects it when you proofread. Plus, the problamatic words amount to less that one tenth of one percent of the story. It just not that distracting. It even happens to professional writers. I had occasion to have a long personal conversation with a woman who is a pro in the SF/Fantasy field with easily over 30 books to her name. I happened to mention I'd seen a typo in one of her books (just making conversation about how the book editor should have caught it). She thanked me, and made note of where it was so it could be fixed in the paperback edition. She then told me that the way she proofreads her own works when the publishers galleys come is to read it backwards, because otherwise she doesn't notice them. What is important, though, is the amazingly high quality of all of your work, and this one in particular. You just blow me away. Thank you so much.
shiloh42 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abusebtw- are you aware that Castles is not marked as "completed"? I'm on chapter 17...adoring it. I'll write a decent review/response soon...
Estel's Maiden 2008-03-11 ch 22,	abuseIf it was not so pathetic, it would be funny where Rodney finds Sheppard on the floor... after that ~~wonderful~~ party John attended :-/ This is such a great story...
Estel's Maiden 2008-03-09 ch 20,	abusewails loudly This heart wrenching story is getting to me...
Estel's Maiden 2008-03-07 ch 19,	abuseHe needs TLC in the most desperate way but how can that be done given how sensitive he is about being touched or even having anyone near him who is not his team?? I really love this character and it all saddens me deeply. I think this is the best piece I have read and trust me I have read a ton of Sheppard directed fiction.

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