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| angietheunicorn 2008-08-21 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| rain-waterfall 2008-08-10 ch 1, | abuseTHis was a really great one-shot! I loved it! |
| BloodSucker2008 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseDO NOT BASH YOUR OWN WRITING!!That was really well written, so in character it was amazing! YA! |
| Iyeshana 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI think that is so beautiful! Very cute, and I'm sad that it's a one-shot :( I like this writing style, and it suits the story perfectly. Beautiful! |
| Sanrio-chan 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI'm used to reading and writing in first person. You did this very well. I like it and it's sweet. I love things that are sweet! ~SC |
| Sly Roxx 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseFluff! I love your take on Edward's point of view. |
| Ms. Topaz 2008-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abusesince you reviewed my story, and were wonderfully critical (contructively), i suppose i should be critical of this story. but i can't. it so perfect. Mistakes? What mistakes are you talking about, exactly? this is SO being favorited! |
| SunFeather'sWings 2008-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your stories! Keep writing |
| blackolives10 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful writing. I adore it. |
| nothingleft 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseMistakes? No mistakes. Beautiful. No other words. Just beautiful. |
| KlutzLike Bella 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute! I really like it. And I have to say that I hate spiders, too. *shudder* |
| Public Secrets 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseEDDIE-KINS! Aw, how kawaii! -narrows eyes- Some girls have all the luck.-pouts- |
| xSweet Allure 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseKatelyn, I should smack you. Or kiss you. I'm not sure which I want to smack you for thinking that this story was weird/painful to read. I want to kiss you because I LOVED IT. so i'll compromise. *gives you playful smack* |
| Angel Ren 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! It was very fluffy and I... well. Uhm. How does one say it? Erm. Not so much symbolism, but the word choice. Yeah. Thats it, the word choice was very eloquent. I think you nailed the characters pretty darn close, too. Very nicely done! Ren |
| snowcoveredroses 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. I love it so much! It was very well written, as well. Nice job in Edwards POV! |