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| arabuzumaki 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abusehahahaha @ last sentence. naruto really loves his ramen lol. |
| Your Little Veela 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusehahhahahahha LMAF that was so funny sasuke got hit ya' know i can clearly see naruto hitting someone for spilling his ramen even if its an accedent ^.^ anywaysvery good story i just loved it |
| Miss.Yamapi.Kara 2007-10-11 ch 2, | abuseSo sad and happy at the same time. You do so well to say a lot in few words - something I only WISH I could do. Great work! I can't say it enough - you write with a precision that is absolutely perfectly suited to fanfiction, as well stories in general. My favourite part in this fic is: " Lee put his hand on Naruto’s shoulder. “I once thought you and he were like Neji and I. I was wrong.” He ducked his head and smiled ruefully. “There’s something different about you. Something different about him.” " I love everything about that part. I don't know what else to say to let you know how much I enjoyed reading 'Your Tears', so how about I just add it to my Favourite Stories List? ^_^ All the best, Miss.Yamapi.Kara |
| Miss.Yamapi.Kara 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseHehe Bastard Sasuke... I love this! It seems very appropriate for Sasuke to be jealous of ramen - he's just that screwed up. "In which Sasuke wants more attention than he's getting." < I think that was put very well. ^_^b Missed out a capital 'c' in " “What are you trying to do? ** me off?! ‘cause it’s working!” " but no big deal. Hinata's addition there was perfectly timed! I could just imagine the silence, and then her little squeak piping up. And the ending is awesome. I think it's something Naruto would say, too. Great job! Good luck with your projects, and be proud of this one! :D ~Miss.Yamapi.Kara |
| Maliciously Creative 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseLast line was the absolute BEST! I like this short better than the other one though (chapter 2). It was funnier so for me it was better and of course the kiss didn't hurt it either. XD Nice, look forward to more in the future. |
| yhaio 2007-09-28 ch 2, | abuseaww so cute! update soon |
| Shadow Eclipse 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abusecute update sson |
| Clow Angel 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseCute! *Tsks* Sasuke, you're such a jerk for spilling Naruto's ramen. XD |