-whimper- This is such a heartwarming story! It's so bittersweet - a first kiss with Miroku but it's in the middle of a fight.

I am SO gonna read your Inufics! They're just so good!

Strawberry ^^

I read the manga, (which has finally ended), and this is one of my favorite chapters. You did a wonderful job using words and emotions to describe the chapter. I don't think people understand how much the kiss ment to Sango, and how scared she was. You did a really good job showing just that.

Wow! This is so emotional! I love it.

aw. another sad little one shot. great, but really sad.

Oh...lovely. Sad, but lovely.

D-d-does he die?

I probably will never find out how InuYasha ends unless someone tells me for a variety of reasons.

So does he die? What about Sango, Kagome, Shippo, and InuYasha? Koga?

But in your fanfic - does Miroku die?

I almost started crying when I read this. It's so tragic, it gives me that little pinch in my chest when I read it. I hope this becomes a twofer just so I can HOPEFULLY read a happy ending...I can't help it, I'm a sucker for happy endings.

poor Sango...

This is incredible. It was well written, and... I don't how to say it, but the ending made it. The ending was perfect.

My goodness...that was simply incredible. What an excellent story to have it be my first Inuyasha Fan-Fic I read. Thank you for being such an exquisite author. By far one that will make a mark on my favorites list by having read only one story from you.

The way you interpreted her feelings for her first kiss were a bit chliche at the beginning, but then I thought 'they have to be cliche, for the simple fact that it is her fantasy kiss'.

As I continued reading, your writing gave off this unique style as an author that placed the reader into the story and deeply goes inside the character. Having that said, I felt her pain in finding love, yet her feeling of selfishness was also felt. I never looked at it that way having that if Naraku had not killed her family, she would have never met Miroku. Sure, made me think of the obvious...but nontheless, you made me think.

As I said before, incredible writing skills, and I simply can't wait to read more from you.

that was beautiful, and I'm glad that someone took the time to write a story, even if it was a one-shot based on what's going on right now in the manga. This chapter you based this on is very sad, and I really do believe that you captured it personally with a sad scene like sango's first kiss (and miroku not even concious for it being in his state) You did a great job!

+fav.!

damn...was that in the manga? Kami, the ending:
"Even if we all die in the final battle, at least I have that one, sole memory in my heart to make me at peace.

And that is all that I need."
it sent chills through my body...

When I read the manga, the first thing I thought was "Takahashi will not let Miroku die!" I mean, his kazanna has to be healed - she isn't heartless, after all. I think their best hope now is Sesshoumaru, since he is the one who hurt Magatsuhi last time. His bakusaiga was just incredible against Byakuya's thousands of youkai.
Anyways, I'm rambling. Really sweet story!

aww
man, i have to start reading inuyasha again! Its just so hard to get the manga, and ive been busy lately.

wonderful job with this one-shot!
splendid!

~Miko

That was a sad scene, and you captured it perfectly.

OMG I that kiss scene was so sad! lol. That's not the one everyone was waiting for. Makes me wonder if she resigned to the fact that she can't save Kohaku by what she said in it. Like she could only save Miroku. I interpret things too much. lol.

Love the story!

Aw, it was so sad -- But SO well written! I loved it! Great job!