Honestly, I feel really REALLY weird reading this story about Shawn and Bret. I love both Bret and Shawn, though I am really biased because I love Shawn more. (Probably because I loved him before I loved Bret). Anyway...even though I have a weird image of the two in my head, despite that, you have an excellent start to a very promising story. I so laughed my ** off when Shawn told Roger that he only made out with him for fun. I could just see the crushed look on that guy's face :D Bwahahahahaha I can't wait to see how things develop...It's late but I'll def finish reading and reviewing each chapter when I get the chance.

Ebony my youngest star how are you? great chapter keep doing your best
Love
LC

Shawn's a bigass baby!

EBONY! great chapter i heart u

Can't wait to read more of this.

A CLIFFIE?! Argh!

EBONY YOU ARE BACK I LOVE YOU! glomps great job on this chapter

Hmm that's what he get from snitching on Shawn.
This part was so funny.
update soon ok

shawn is such a meanie

Not for nothing, but why does Shawn deserve to get any sort of revenge after all the ** he pulled?

That daydream can't come true if Shawn keeps acting like a hypocrical biotch! Imagine demanding why Bret couldn't pretend to be his boyfriend after what he did with Roger.

Ah, so how does Shawn like a taste of his own medicine?

Ebony you rock this is a great chapter keep up the amazing work love ya

Great start!

Ebony you have done it again great start loving your work. Hugs and Kisses to you my friend