Lovely story! I enjoyed reading it very much.

Aw =)

I liked it, however, I am not sure that Lizzy would regret initially turning him down, because at that point he was arrogant and disdainful and generally rude. He needed to change.

Keep writing!

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Very nice vignette! The movie's hand scenes are memorable but your story makes them cohesive - like bookends. Thanks!

well written, lovely!

Lovely piece. Effectively sums up Lizzy's conflicted emotions. :D

Wow, that was really fantastic and brilliant! It ties everything together so nicely and gives me a new (and dare I say better?) view of the events leading up to that morning. ^^

Keep up the good work!

this is well-written. perhaps you can consider doing a full-length story?

Wow! I never connected the practicing line at Rosings with Darcy's visit the next day! That was really insightful--I'll have to remember that for the next time I read P + P! thanks for posting. take care- Req

Really lovely. This is my 1st reading of your work and I enjoyed every word!

Was also taken by Darcy's hands - how MM used them in the film to convey emotion. AND also loved how Lizzie would forget to breathe whenever she saw or thought of Darcy - so great that you used that here as!

Hope you can offer more insights in the future - love these characters. Thanks for posting your story!