Great idea for a story. I just think that you should probably work on your grammar a bit.

I like it. Your user is Esme something...Twilight fan?

Well, I'm going to check your profile to see!

Nicole

hey this was really good. short but good will you be continuing with the story i belive it could be expanded further like with how she fits in for a longer time period. do the parents like her after the first few minutes, their own impressions. cheers A for Antechinus

well... that was short and a little pointless. and there were quite a few mistakes, but...