wow...that was...strange. But in a good way. Not quite what I expected, but certainly realistic.

Oh... creepy.

You know at first I didn't like capitalizinf the h of "Him" but toward the end when you talked about the two hims it made more sense... although I think it might have made more sense to have Ron's him be capitalized not Severus' because Ron is much more important than Sevy to Hermione in this fic.

Either way though I really liked it!

uh... wow... Hermione went retty sadistically evil. gotta say I feel sorry for Snape though, having to come as someone else to get love from his own desire.

ew.

Nice story.
I liked how it was flipped from normal stories, hermione being the dark one and being loved by snape...
Can't wait till update...hopefully soon.

Horror. Both ways. Well done. (But why?)

This is phenomenal. It is a rare treat to read a "dark" Hermione character.

Very very interesting. Well written and ... thoughtful (??). idk what word I'm looking for, but this story is good.
Peace,
Yellow Moon

that was pretty cool

Cheers
AJ

so nice. I love the way you used capitalized and italicized "him" to show the two men in her world. And it's nice to see hermione be the cruel manipulating one.

Brava! I'll look forward to your future efforts!

SO SAD! I ALMOST CRIED!

Wow. I wasn't expecting that. Really well done.
I like how dark it is, and that things are not fully explained, just taken for granted, as they would be in her mind, as she is thinking these things.

As an ardant HG/SS shipper I applaude your unconventional take on their relationship. I like the way you didnt say what happened in the war, or how Hermione comes to be in Snape's home, or how he earns his money these days. The story is their "relationship" I found it chilling and twisty. So of course I want more more MORE!

Sad...for Him especially. I always liked Snape in the books and films. Always felt that he deserved love even after all that he did. An angry,lost soul...though one of his own making I suppose. Anyway, I liked your story, very poignant. Hope to read more.