Well done. I liked it very much :3

So beautiful love the interaction between the two ; w ;

Ahhh well done as usual

Very nice. I really liked how it developed. I especially loved your Axel. Excellent work!

hehe i liked it! it was very nice and well short...

*shocked* I KNOW I read this before, why the hell is it letting me review? HOW COULD I FAIL TO GO ON RECORD AS SAYING THIS IS AWESOME? HOW COULD THIS BE MY FIRST TIME RAVING ABOUT THIS?

Well, I love it. I love Axel, I love the interaction, and I LOVE the understated emotion that is so tangible in ALL of it. ADKLJASKSAJHFKSJHFF FUCK. You can damn near feel the raw vulnerability and awkwardness between them. So delicious. And HAWT. 8D

And HMMM. Grouch Roxas...Interested Axel...did we decide if you have some kind of soft spot for this dynamic? ;) ;)

I LOVE THIS STORY HOMG. There. You may quote me. :D

I absolutely adored this :3

Really wonderfully-written and laced with drama, I loved this :D

o are you gonna write more of this? Cuz it's fun 3 *dances*

I love fics that are written like this. :D

schweet!

I love it!

Love,

Faye Silo

Another great akuroku fanfic.. You're stories are always wonderful to read :) Really awesome!

Of some reason, this makes my heart warm. It wasnt sappy, disgustingly cute, bright or anything. It feels like life xD

realy really cute!

i'm serious most cute one shot story i have already read XD

I love your fics when they aren't part of the game. (is it called AU? I'm not too familiar with the jargon)

This fic isn't like your typical one. It's great!

That was lovely :D

I'm guessing that Axel has been watching Roxas for a long time so when he flirted with him and got horizontal then ran away, it really hurt. Once more, that was lovely :)