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| Calenlass Greenleaf1 2007-10-01 ch 1,  | abuseThe dialogue here is a bit too modern (with all the contractions) I feel, but aside from that, it's an interesting idea. I've never give much thought to Tuor...perhaps some of his adult life, but not his childhood life. Regards, Calenlass |