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Reviews For: Grey Skies and a Slow Train Coming

Translucent Darkness
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was really, really, really good! I loved it!
Blu Rai
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusewow...this is really good. It's really deep! Wow...I really like this. It's very creative. Thank you! xD
TtoboggI
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abusewill u keep it up? will you?? *.*

=**
Rambling Thestral
2007-10-13
ch 1,
abuseWow. You're an amazing writer. And the effect is spectacular. I love your depictions--AH. This is just wonderful.
phoenix of hell
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseOh my God, this is so romantic, and dramatic! I simply love it, beautiful!
LA11
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abuse...That was really beautiful.
Great job!
XitaUnlucky
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseIts hard to find a good pairing for L, he's one of those characters who just doesn't seemed interested in any gender what so ever.

I like this pairing though its really cute yet not unbelievable, infact I think I might have found a new pairing to like. Excellent, comforting little story.
milk0bar
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, very nice :) I'm an L/Raito fan and yet I really enjoyed this (and trust me, it's really hard for me to like a fic that doesn't have my OTP). I like the idea of them being stuck in an abandoned train station - it's very symbolic.
You have a few typos that you should fix, but otherwise it's really good!
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