The part where you said "Link and I started dating. It was only for the cameras. It was about as deep as the makeup we had to wear." confused me. Other than that I did enjoy a different take on Amber. She a character I wouldnt have chosen to write about in my fanfiction. Good job. Keep writing!

Awesome I love how you potrayed Amber :)

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This is good. I'm not sure I believe that Link and Amber never really liked each other," but I can see her wanting it for popularity reasons. I like the simile, "IT was about as deep as the makeup we had to wear." This was an interesting look at Amber's point of view. Good job, keep writing!

That was awesomesauce. When I did "Hairspray" with my school, I was dying to get her part. Of course, I didn't, but when the girl who played her was at dance company practice, I got to stand in. (Of course, I was the one who had the show memorized, but still.) One rehearsal, I sang along to "Cooties," and the boy who played Link said, "Wow. You should have been Amber. Not only can you not dance, but you can also sing and deliver the lines better." That made my day.

That story brings back so many memories from rehearsal. Good job.

This is a very interesting insight into Amber's character and I really enjoyed it. I feel like the fact that you wrote it in first person really highlighted this part of Amber. Well done.

Wonderful!

Ooh. How intriguing. I see you posted this a while ago, but three years later it probably hasn't lost any of its power. I loved the insight into what Amber thought of everyone, including herself!

I liked it :) Its real and most likely exactly what she would've thought and done

I always thought Amber was only doing the things she did to please her mother.

Good story...it shows a different side to Amber. Good thinking.

I really liked this. It's interesting to see different aspects of the musical from Amber's point of view. Nice work!

That was a good insight to Amber, to show she's not what she seems. :)

This made think about how Amber could feel all through the story. Nothing says Amber is a really bad person, but been influenced by her mother. You never know what are other people passing by. Congratulations to the author.

I enjoyed this. Most fics make Amber look really mean. One thing, though:

"Mom, of course was completely against segregation"

Shouldn't that be integration?