This is crazy awesome! I am officially jealous of you . . . I need some of your skillage XD

*stares wide-eyed* What. The. Hell. We are learning about this in English. I knew it already, but . . . damn. This is great, a little vague, but amazing nonetheless. Great job XD. Oh, and the LEP are scaring me.

Creepy!

Wow! I greatly enjoyed this story. It's like... 1984 and the Giver had a baby, and that was this!
I liked it a lot! (Although, that much should be blantly obvious!)
Really, really, really, good job!

whoa. this is intense. so all the humans killed themselves in a war, and Haven has turned into a verision of Big Brother is Watching? nice. it's hard to write furture fics for book, but you've done this very beautifully. awesome.

"And remember, the LEP see everything." Urgh, MUCH too 1984, there, and with the doublethink type of thing.

But I loved it, for it was very, very pretty. *pets teh pretty futurefic* (I have recently been obsessing over the V for Vendetta movie, so this feeds nicely into my current dystopian!future fascination.)

*should probably work harder to make her reviews helpful*

-Eff Haych

Was "she" Holly?

I'm confused at the character, but the story was amazing!

I'm totally in luv with it!

Whoa. Who was it? For some reason this 'perfect' world reminds me of some sci-fi TV series (or at least one episode)I saw once. It's a wonderful one shot though.

~Lidia

Weird...this just smacks of the Giver, if you know what I mean. Wow...

Lily

Wow. I just finished nominating a fic (Shannon's new one), and I guess I'll just have to go back and nominate this one!! This is just too good and perfect!! And it was AH! w00t! Attention reviewers! This fiction is amazing! That is all. And remember, Evie watches all reviews!!

~Evieshoes