(I'm attempting to spam you with reviews. I guess.) ... There's actually not that much I'd like to say though, other than my heart was torn to pieces and put back together again along with Ryou's during the picture prank.

Also, that's a horrible cliffhanger to leave a story at for two plus years. Rectify, please? :3

This is awesome. So Bakura is not the number 1 ** I thought he was going to be. Will we see more characters in this fic?

This is a really interesting idea! I really, REALLY liked the part where Ryou scared Bakrua there with him basically assaulting him. THAT was fun! I'm excited about seeing where this is going, especially with that cliffhanger you left us with! Very good story so far, I look forward to more!

OMG! Ugh, I hate cliffys.

Hey great chap!!
great and long!!
Poor Ryou!! :( nice that Bakura gave the picture bk though
cant wait to see wats gona appen next with the man with the gun ! XD so excited!! lol

Hello again :D gah finally caught up. man that was good. i quite liked that toilet bit actually. it made things more ...good and dramatic :D for me, i'd be kind of dull if Ryou just punched Bakura or something. running to the toilet seemed like a more unique thing. hm well i really hope this updates again, because im loving it :) and i'll see you later. bye bye!

Oh man, i had lots to catch up on, this chapter and the next one. :D i'll give 2 reviews because thats what i owe you guys :D sorry for taking so long -_- forgive me? i loved this chapter, i couldnt stop laughing at the spider thing and Bakuras reaction XD man i haven't heard of little miss muffet in a long time :) well see you next review which will come shortly

Haha, an awesome end to the chapter! I absolutely adore this story so far, and I can defintely tellthat you're a very talented writer. I love the idea behind this, and you've characterized everyone perfectly. I can't wait to see more of this.

Ahh! xD It is so different, but I like it alot! It's so much better like this~. It'd probably be even better if I didn't know what happened but! Really; you did a great job fixing it up and I think it's coming along hella rockin'ly! ;D

“Don’t ** bring your big-**, ** up pets here!”-Omgg, I died. xDD That is too funny. Oh~ and Ryou can hold that spider-thing against him later~! Poor Bakura! Did the spider thing really happen in our RP? I don't remember. xD; Then again, when did we even start this? Like a year ago? You still owe me a post. For how long it takes you to do them, I think you better have one 20 pages long when you come back next week. xD I kid, I kid. -harthart-

This story is just so...

gorgeous

xD Had to get you. I saw a couple of tiny little mistakes but I don't know; they aren't really needed to be fixed if you don't want them to be. It's perfectly readable with them. -wouldn't fix them- But then, I barely spell check and avoid reading my stories again just so I won't have to find the mistakes I know I missed. xD;; -'tardedd-

Either way! This is so cute and I can't wait to see the third chapter! Write it up mofo! AND HAVE FUN AT THUG GRAMMA'S

Cute story! LOL! Bakura is an **! I hope he get's rid of that trait once Ryo gets a hold of him ;D

Great idea!! sounds awesome so far!! :D cant wait to see wats gonns appen between them next!! :D

Oh! I love it! :D
The only suggestion I have is to try and space out the paragraphs a little bit more, that way it wont look so clumpped and difficult to read! D:
Great job on it. :P I cant wait to see how their relationship goes on in future chapters! ^^

What is it with you guys and "cop" stories, hm? ; ) And, Bakura needs to "cuss" some more! ; ) All teasing aside, this is a great start to a new story that I look forward to reading more of in the future. Bakura going semi-medieval on the dolt who rear-ended him (there's a joke in there somewhere...) and then taking out his frustrations on the Mercedes was just hysterical. And, in "typical" Bakura fashion, he shoots off his mouth, allowing his infamous temper to takeover and boy, although he had every right in the world to be torqued off at the idiot who hit him, he couldn't have chosen the worse person to verbally thrash... oh, and then purposely vandalize their car. Enter Ryou... yeah, he doesn't come across as the sports writer type - and Bakura's assessment nailed poor Ryou in the blink of an eye. And Bakura immediately pegged Ryou as "**"? Ryou is screwed. (I'm gonna leave that one alone, too.) I loved the ending. I wonder how Ryou's little mantra of "I'll do good and save his life!" changed once he was personally acquainted with His Evilness only a pencil's throw away. Loved it!

Hi! i LOVE it, its so damn cool, i really liked the final moments of this chapter [pencil flicking part] , that was rather awesome, and definately not i was expecting...XD which is very very well done :D good on you both? [it is 2 people right?] well i hope you update this piece soon, its so damn good. seeya later!

Oh Wow! I like the way this story is starting off. Poor, poor, poor Ryou. Having to deal with an ** like Bakura. Then again this is Bakura we are talking about. You have him so spot on in this story. Hard to find one that can do that. Anyways, I like this chapter and the story is off to a good start. Keep it up and keep up the great work. Also please update as soon as you can. See ya next chapter.