o.O more please continue nice plot

The awesomeness of this story only means that you should continue it! Ha it's an awesome AU of the Nanoha series, and a well written one at that. You had me at chapter one, so I think I'd be really sad if this ended...

Wow wow ... WOW!

please i hope you can update very soon this story PLEASE because I LOVE THIS STORY!

Wow, great story. The system says you haven't updated in...about a year and a half. I hope you didn't completely abandon this story and will finish it sometime...

I am hooked on this story please continue it as soon as you can

GAH! Cliffhangers... >_<
Really good plot you have going here.

Looking forward to your next chapter~! =)

Well-written and definitely interesting so far. I won't push for the next chapter, but will instead add this to my alert list so I can read it when updated.

Definitely looking forward to more of this over the next, well, whatever timeframe. ^^;

Another story by you that I'm finding myself being addicted to...

I hope you update this one soon too. XD

Where's the continuation?!? Hope that the author will finish this at some point. Too gripping, although poor Fate is so scarred it might take a while for Nanoha to heal her.

Just wondering if Nanoha might be suffering from (I think the name is) Stockholm syndrome?

please,please,updated next chapter. i dying to know what happen next.

M...you left off with a cliffhanger. People probably want to kill you for this, you know. And by the way, you're not very good with writer's blocks. You haven't updated S h a t t e r e d in almost a year.

Yeah, that's right, Eli. I /know/ these things. And if I had known them sooner, I would have made you update faster.

Oh...that was amusing...Fate and Nanoha's interactions are so...adorably frustratingly funny. Rrggh...do I need to say more? U...p...d...a...t...e...

M...well. Your punishment didn't stop you from being kidnapped by M and I, did it? XD Haha, that was a fun day.

Anyway, this was a great chapter. Lots of action, it gripped my attention, and of course, /again and as always/, your Fate is...SEXY.

=D

...*jabs with stick*...Update!

Go sit! Write! Now!

Very good. Very like you, too. Your syntax is, as always, nearly impeccable. And your Fate is awesomely sexy.

I just wish you'd hurry up and finish the next chapter.

Seriously, Fay. Get off your lazy ** and update. That's an order.