Interesting. I'm gonna wait for your next update! *wink*

This chapter's pacing is speedy. And of cours, there's angst. I love the consistency, keep it up.

*pets Mikan*
Ohw, you poor thing *faces cervana* and cruel author! Hehehe. Peace. You're good, keep up the great work. I recommend though, that you should get a beta-reader. It will be a big help, I promise. I have a beta of my own, and I'm slowly learning how she imbibes grammar lessons in my head when I send her my fics. I see constant spelling errors, and though they don't bother me that much, it's still quite distracting.


On the story..The plot is thickening! I can't wait to see what happens next..so, I'm on to the next chapter. *wink again*

As I've said I never really finished watching the series..and uh, I admit I'm having problems regarding the characters. I can't sort out who's canon and who's an OC..Hehhe. This is getting interesting by the way. *wink*

Aw. *sniff*
Poor Mikan. Since it's labeled "Tragedy" with hints of romance, I think I shouldn't hope for a happy ending..Oh well. This is a pretty nice chapter by the way. Very clever to give Natsume a fireproof gift.. XD

A very angsty chapter again. Nice interaction between the ice queen and Ruka, hehe. And Mikan's leaving in 5 days...Hm. I should see what'd happen.

Hahaha! The banter is so cute, that made me smile (and that somehow made up for the little sadness your 'thing called acceptance' caused me, haha). Einstein? Newton? POLKA? Just so adorable!!

:D
On to the next chapter. XD

An Alice that crumbles the work of God.. Hm..Pretty controversial. A very wonderful Alice though--one that can maneuver destiny. It's very intriguing and I want to see it take effect in the next chapters. XDD

Oh! And nice depiction of the Ice Queen too! *hugs*

Mikan's in the hospital..? (I think I should get back to the last chapter)
Ruka finally appears!! but with too little exposure. Hehe. XD
Goody, nice chapter. :D

Aw, wasn't that sweet? A Mikan and Natsume duet. *melts*
That was cute--and you never fail to put some angst in each chapter. The spelling errors are becoming more noticeable, though.

(I hope Ruka appears now...he!!)
XD

I'm on to the next chapter.

Nice. There are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't mar the 'coolness' of this fic. I'm on to the next chap. "D

Nice snapshot on Mikan's childhood. I never really finished watching the series (and I don't know if they provided some info on Mikan's childhood) and this simply made it for me. Well done.
I love the midnight scene by the way. *wink*

A pretty good way to start a fic. Good job on the prologue! :D

this is really great plz update when you can

LOL ure story its pretty cool but me dont understand or do i? Haine-chan is mikan BUT Mikan IS at the SAME time in the hospital? thats confusing but awsome story ^^