See, now this is what I imagined would happn after Legend. Personally, I am a fan of Lily and Darkness being together, for their relationship is the epiphany of what people want; to succumb to their darkest desires, to have what others cannot. Lily and Darkness had that, but then she foolishly ran from something that she feared, for she did not know it.

Very good story. And I like the character of Daisy. I think the way you worked her was very nice. She was Jack's child, but possessed the wisdom only known to those who live in darkness. Good job.

I loved it. Enough said. Arigato for delivering such a beautiful fanfiction.

Amazing! I loved the stark contrast between the forest world and Darkness's world. You really captured the emotion perfectly. And even though the ending was dark, it was an amazing story. I don't know if you would want to write it, but I could definitely see this carried out into a story where she ultimately finds redemption.

It's great how Lily went from torment to joy at the end. Although she resisted, it turns out Darkness was what's best for her. The scene with the mirror was amazing, one sentence summed up the dreaminess of the scene perfectly.

That was good. I hope you update soon.

Very nicely done... I want more Lily/Darkness, not nearly enough fics for them. :)

Let me just say, thank God there's more people out there writing Legend fanfic! This section seems kinda dead, and that is a total shame.

That said, this was simply brilliant. It was dark and full of emotion. I just love how you wrote it, broken up into parts, going back and forth between what happened before and then what was presently happening. I especially like the scene after Lily told him she wanted to kill the unicorn. Of course Darkness knew she would betray him.

I just loved this story. You are a very gifted writer. I can't wait to read more of your work. :)

Bravo! The story was very well written and kept me involved. Part of me wanted her stay with Jack...but a larger part was waiting for her to run to Darkness. I always rather thought they belonged together far more than Lilly and Jack ever did. Thank you very much for posting your story, and completing it :)