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| sweets09 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseDel! Of course I read this... I've been really busy lately (school is kicking my you-know-what...) but I just had to read this when I saw the alert. :) Oh, and I think it fabulous that you can't think of Race without "his Sweets" anymore! :) It makes me happy. hehe :D I really loved this drabble! I'm pretty sure Jack would've been very gentlemanly the first time so great job with that! I also loved the chemistry and subtle cute things (like the hand holding down the street... aww!) you seemed to effortlessly put in there. It was wonderful! As usual, your writing is amazing!! I'm really excited for another chappy of FPF (...yea. I decided to write it like that from now on. :D ). I'll be talking to ya soon! -Sweets |
| Raven's Wing 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI like that Jack was didn't force it on her and you made him sweet. I like sweet!Jack. He's such a nice boy. I just can't help but wonder what it would be like to wake up next to Christian Bale every day for the rest of my life... I am pretty sure that I would start to love mornings. -_^ |
| energizerturtle45 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really good one-shot. I'm not sure why I liked it, but it was good. Maybe because it wasn't too cheesey the way everything happened... Good job! |