I love this, very sweet. Very sensitive and real, and most importantly, true to their characters. It's really great.

It's a v cute ficlet. X3

I luv it.

So so good!

This was great! Good job!

Yo three words "THAT WAS ALSOME"

damn nicely done

AH! IT WAS SO BEEPING AWESOME!

YOU WRITE SO DARN WELL YOU ACTUALLY MADE ME FEEL THE PASSION!

AND IT WAS SO SWEET, TOO BAD, IT'S JUST ONE CHAPTER LONG, IT COULD'VE BEEN MUCH LONGER AND I WOULDN'T MIND IT AT ALL.

SO

LOVE YA!

That was sweet. I think you have a good feel for a slightly older Danny and Sam. But ah, the burden of everyone knowing. ::shakes head::

This was a great story. A sequel about when they get married would be really good too I bet. Keep on writing some of the best DXS fluff on fanfiction.

Perfect.

Sweet. Hot. Descrpitive. All in all the right places.

-Em

That was very beautiful. I haven't been in here so long, I miss this place a lot. I'm so busy now-a-days, it's a wonderful thing to kick off with, again. I feel pretty good. Hope to see you around.

i think it turned out well!

cd

lol very cute, this was.. cool and it was not borderline R i don't think lol can't wait for more! and Happy Birthday to Lacey52!

-CUTIE

i liked it. not too much sexual words, compare to most crap i find. Some more descriptive words of the room would be helpful, like colour of the carpet or where abouts in the town they were. on the whole, i love danny phantom, and i think his love with Sam in inevitable, and really sweet, as you put it. i just wish it wasnt so complicated, but thats life. i hope, when i have the money, to make a live action version of danny phantom.

that was real cool...no...it was awesome )

aw...that was adorable. :] loved it!