Whoa.

I think this went right over my head. (whoosh)

I still really like it though- the language and style was beautiful. Another great story.

I'm not familiar with your writting, so perhaps I didn't gasped it because of that.

It was deep, very deep, too deep for me. I believe that's my fault and not yours. If I were a more experienced reader then maybe I could reach the beauty I know to be hiding somewere in the story.

Perhaps I'll understand next story (I'm going to read them all)

God Damn. You never cease to amaze me. It's unbelievable.
Everytime you write something new it leaves me stunned, flabbergasted(sp?), and amazed.
You put all my stories to shame.
You are a very talented person.
I loved this story and the concept. It was beatiful.
It was awesome, It was totally like you!
:]

i'am a fan of the numbres & titles style

beautiful [:

Um. Is it just me or is the ending entirely confusing?

I love the story. I get the story. It's super wicked rad blah blah blah amazing but :( I'm not following with the whole pose/click thing. Like was it all just photographs?

Essentially I mean that a different type of conclusion would go over better.

Otherwise amazing.

I can't say that I caught on to every little thing that you said, but I think I did a pretty good job of interpreting the poetic-like lines and phrases that you wrote out. I have to say...I have NEVER read anything like this. It's so beautiful, even the parts with death and our trio losing their youth- it was all so amazing I could not stop reading. I want to read it over and over again, to pore over each part, to try to understand your conclusions and create my own. Wow, Zanisha, you are definitely one heck of a writer. *applauds*

There's so much jam-packed in here but it's not rushed. I read that article from the link you have in your profile (about writing)...and there's no way in heck that your writing sucks. XD But I know you just put that up there for everyone else to read. ;P And please, I would very much enjoy some SelphieTidusWakkaness someday from you. ^__^

...Oh, my god.

It was perfect. It was poetic. It was amazing.

And it put the one-shot I just wrote to shame.

*goes and emoes in corner*

I don't even have a favorite part; it was all too beautiful.

So I'm sick & it like took all of my focus and power to comprehend this, but it was beautiful. Some lines really reminded me of Rent lol but that may just be because I'm obsessed.

& Yeah the storyline is kinda hard to follow, but that's a good. I know I like to read fast & tend to skim over small things, so making it like this MAKES you read the whole entire thing so you can't miss out on any detail. So that's cool =]

I also feel like this would inspire an amazing painting XD but that's just me. If only I could paint.

I'm done babbling lol & I'll go review your other story now, whee~

--Emerald31

this is one of my fave writing styles.

I mean, the division. I hate reading through pages of one long drabble. I love when they are all split up like this.

This was a bit loopy. I sort of pictured the island talking in there somewhere... uh. Idk either. It was good though, and I got the plot pretty well without having to look too hard between the lines. :)

just amazing
i cant explain it

also the ending is really cool
not sure what your trying to say with it
but its still soo beautifull..
your style is AMAZING

Well, everyone is all "OMFGUH STUNNING AMAZING WORK MY LOVEMUFFIN OF JOY" about this. But, you know what?

IT ISN'T TRUE UNTIL JESUS PROCLAIMS IT TO BE.

And, since I proclaim it NOW, I am technically the first reviewer, so, bwaha. I AM AWESOME.

I just had ice cream. Obviously, you can't tell, as I am being completely serious and professional in my review, so I just thought I'd mention this for absolutely no reason whatsoever.

... Right.

Anyways, this was gorgeous, as per usual. I love your imagery and the style. It's unique and offbeat and everything I love about your writing in one fanfiction about my favorite trio. It's like chocolate. But with WORDS.

My analogies are made of the kind of brilliance few people understand and even fewer acknowledge.

I really need to read Francesca Lia Bloc if her style is anything like this. It's just perfect.

LimeWire just tried to kill my song. Bitch, oh no it didn't. 8|

I love you, Sea Monster. And I love your writing of super amazing wording and gorgeous metaphors. Have a glass of invisible, ninja chocolate milk. ♥

Yay, awesomeness from Zanisha! School is SO stressing me out right now. I feel like I've gone up in flames too! XP I loved this oneshot!

'Where do we belong? “Wherever we set our feet.”'

I love that line! Gosh, your writing is great. :)I just get sucked into reading it. What you write and how you write it just draws me in. Keep on writing, always!

Holy shit, Zanisha.

That was one of the most incredible things I have read in a long time. Just brilliant.

It drew me in from the first sentence, and you made it so I couldn't stop reading. The symbolism was just fantastic, and the constant air/sea/land thing wasn't annoyingly overused, it was perfect.

You painted a picture with your words, and not one of those fingerpainted picture. A MASTERPIECE!

Wow, I don't really know how else to describe how I love this. It was just so beautiful, with the perfect amount of mystery, of confusion, and the fire part at the end- that was an excellent way to top it all off.

Stunning. Just STUNNING work.