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| Avatargirl92 2008-05-02 ch 1,  | abuse*begins to sob* Oh, that was beautiful! |
| Got Rice 15278 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's good...but it's redundant. |
| Shippo's Little Demon 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseGood! |
| Karoshi Note 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseYou know, this idea somehow didn't come to my mind, when I saw that episode. But now... Thanks for proving, that there ARE some good Avatar fanfictions. |
| storm-of-insanity 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI love this so much! Your use of 2nd person was very effective and especially like your simile about hair down being like a wild beast. |
| FlowerofAdversity 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abusePoignant and fierce, exceptionally written. I can really sense the emotion an intensity in this piece. Please, write more ! |
| Sandra Evans 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. I love the idea that Iroh could escape, but doesn't for Zuko's sake...even though Zuko winds up hurting him every time he sees him. The part in the Headband where Iroh cried made me die a little inside, and this story brought that feeling back. Very good job. |
| pringle.sam 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseE!! I'd never thought that much into the hair, really nothing beyond, 'Zuko. Has. Shaggy wild hair. SEXY!!' Sad, I know. 8] Thanks for the new food for thought! |
| ohsoxalive 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. May I say that last line really tugged on my heartstrings? It really did. And the point of view you chose added a wonderful effect to the story, really pulling the reader into a deeper thought. Amazing job. -karen |
| Lost In A Dark Wood 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is really amazing. Great job. |
| wastelander1230 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseclever i realy like it and isnt it that mai and zuko never say i love you they said i dont hate you... i dont know but that is just... well i cant put my finger on it but i want to bet you know what i mean |
| Music Box 2007-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh. Thank you. I just saw that episode today, and any part with Zuko in it caused me to sob and hit my head on the desk repeatedly. This makes it just a little better. |
| Jewely2951 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseWow this was exsellent. I really really loved this. Super. :) And I really do think Iroh could so escape that prison. I mean come on! I saw like ONE FREAKIN GAURDE!aww well super!:) |
| midnightwaters 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseThis fic is so good! I love your interpretation of the episode! |
| razzledazzle41191 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseYOU=GENIUS! This is SO great, I can't even put it into words! I didn't even think about Zuko wearing his topknot again except to visit Iroh, but you're so right. And the last paragraph about how Iroh could break out if he wante to but stays for Zuko is SO true. I love this story and it's going on my favorites. |