Reviews for Entwined Symphony

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elrail 2008-09-23 ch 12,	abusevery good
gaul1 2008-09-22 ch 12,	abusefunny, byes
Michael The-Zorch Haney 2008-09-19 ch 6,	abuseIts not often that I read a chapter that puts me on the floor laughing my butt off but this one ... LMAO! This chapter was just priceless. I've often wondered what Ranma-chan and Anko would be like if they were friends and I was right! :D
HitmanPAC 2008-06-17 ch 12,	abuseNice story. I really like the idea of Ranma trying to be Naruto's mother, and not succeeding very well. I also really, really like your style of separating things into past and present. Sometimes the 'year from present, about a month after they met' titles are confusing - like, who exactly is 'they'? I figured it out after continuing, but it probably could have been better explained, or rephrased, or something. Anyway, I enjoy it, and look forward to more.
j4 n3 2008-06-15 ch 12,	abuseupdate please
Mackon 2008-06-12 ch 12,	abuseer?? This seems good, but its really hard to tell. Its like a 100 page story and what you've got here is pages 1, 10, 32, 40, 41, and 67 its all disjointed and muddled. But still the writing is good and if I could tell what was going on I think I might like the plot ... Still hope to read more. Thanks for sharing.
peppymint 2008-06-11 ch 12,	abuseInteresting story. I can't wait to see more of the flashbacks.
The Great Rick 2008-06-11 ch 12,	abuse"...the three adults and 1 six-year-old met in the..." shouldn"t that be one and not 1? The chapter was good and interesting, but the story don't seem to really be progressing foward, but backwark. I'm a little lost.
Ozzallos 2008-06-08 ch 12,	abusethis is from my pda, so i'll be brief. much better than the previous chapters. it feels like we're finally getting to the meat; that is to say solid progress forward. only disturbing thing is the confrontation w/ ranma. after so long in adapting to his life, the whiney breakdown was a bit over the top for me. likewise, he still seems overly skittish around shamps. neither is overtly plot breaking and if an explanation is forthcoming , woot. overall, this is a breath of fresh air from prev. chapters.
MightyKK 2008-06-02 ch 12, anon.	abuseWhy is Ranma so weak ? Ranma seems to be totally OOC - I feel spoiling Naruto is not what Ranma would do.
ranma girl 14 2008-06-01 ch 12,	abuseugh, so many things I wanna know...How is Ranma Naruto's aunt, what happened in the past, and why can't they figure out a stone cell won't hold Ryoga...or atleast put them in a cell away from others. plz pz plz update really fast! ^-^
Launigsiae 2008-06-01 ch 12,	abuseI didin't really get it, what did Naruto mean when he said: "Kaasan is my aunt" O.O ? Hope you update soon, I like your story
JWG 2008-05-29 ch 11,	abuseThis is beginning to remind me of Joseph Heller's "Catch 22." Chapter after chapter of seemingly unrelated or almost unrelated anecdotal snippets. Heller pulled together a masterpiece at the end. I hope to be pleased if you can do the same -- but the jury's still out. Write something everyday! -JW
ranma girl 14 2008-05-29 ch 11,	abuseNice chapter, I wonder what Naruto will think of Ryoga and Shampoo. plz plz plz update fast! ^-^
XStylus 2008-05-29 ch 10,	abuseOkay, so you've established that Naruto absolutely hates the fact that Ranma doesn't act feminine. He doesn't want to learn from her, insists that she wears something feminine, doesn't want her to assert herself... He basically wants her to be Kasumi. I hope at some point there will be some explanation as to why he acts like this. Why is he so desperate for a "typical" mother? Or am I completely reading this wrong?

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