bravo!
I really liked this fic!
it pulls at the heart, it has good plot, and innovation to make him a guardian!
of course the sex scene didn't hurt ;)

This is such an amazing piece and completely unique from all the other Touya and Yukito fanfiction.

Everyone was written really well and I will not be able to resist the urge to draw Touya as a guardian for much longer ^^;

dude, why was he such a prat at the end? you would think Touya was a little more logical than that.

anyways, I just had to say it because it bothered me a lot.

But great story, it was really cute and sweet. I just disliked the end.

how original! Different stoies are always a breath of fresh air. It was so sad, so moving; I loved it! My only complaint is my personal taste; although I can see most of my favorite pairings as switching, I've NEVER been able to see it for Yue. So many people seem to like a seme Yue, but I hate it. BUT that's just one detail in a great story!

Lottsa love,
LLC

aw!
that was so nice! and cute!! i really liked it! it had such nice fluffiness between touya and yuki/yue!
and your writing didn't suck! it flowed well, and the characters weren't too ooc...YAY!

brilliant! =D

I don't like you. It is so not fair. You made me squeal! THAT IS NOT FAIR! AND COVER MY FACE IN ANTICIPATION! I don't like you at all. Not your fabulous writing, not your flawless layout, nothing!

hey really great story. love how u plan ur plot. it's not too dramatic but still very sweet and touching. think u did capture the characteristics of each person very well. look forward to more of ur stories for cardcaptor sakura! ^o^

Beautiful, wonderful, breathtaking, maginificent ... pick a compliment, any compliment.

This fic had absolutely everything one could ever desire, and it was written flawlessly, capturing the original essences of the characters, but adapting them to meet the plot and extreme situations. Simply put, this is perfection.

I really like the idea of Touya turning into a guardian- it's very unique. Those two together, it's the night and the moon, right? :) Yue and Yukito were written well, like the part on the hospital rooftop and how his struggle not to transform when he heard the news. I enjoyed your usage of the Clow Cards too; Touya fits, albeit a little oddly, with the Earth card. He couldn't be the Dark card, naturally, since she's kind of taken already. Good job!

Aww. that was awesome. i love it.

that was great! :oved it :)