 fantaskie 2007-10-01 . chapter 1I don't know why but the last line really made me laugh...“So, Sesshomaru, let’s first read The Fundamentals of Chemistry.” It paints a rather amusing picture, me thinks.:D This was a nice piece, but I think a proof-reading would have got rid of the typos you've made and the few words you've left out...;)
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~fantaskie |