Very well written.

And despite what most other reviewers have put, I do believe that Will would be able to have a relationship and, though of course keeping the full story closely guarded as it would be extremely close to his heart, he would in time be able to share a little of this part of his life with someone he was having a relationship with (the girl in question seems very understanding ^^) *deep breath*

So well done on breaking the mould and letting Will have a touch of happiness and freedom in his life.

Very true to character again :D

Shichi
:3

NU!
WILL WOULD NEVER BRING SOMEBODY ELSE!
IT'S TOO SACRED!

Lovely. Will is relatively happy and Lra and Pan are still argueing. Can't people see Will's Daemon considering it was ripped out of him and all.

This is a very good fiction, bar one or two small points.

Firstly, Will bringing someone else to the Botanical gardens is something I just don't see happening. His moving on I can understand, but I doubt he'd sully it (for want of a better term) by bringing along another woman.

Secondly, Cara not being able to see Kirjava. This is more of a continuity point, but I do feel it relevant. Kirjava (due to the whole "world of the dead" thing) is a physical daemon, and those can be seen by people with internal daemons like you and me. Mary, Will and the kids in Citigazze all see Pantalaimon, for example.

Besides those two points, though, this is excellent. Well done!

I like this fic a lot. It's a nice little look at the life they both could be leading, yet they still come back every year.

nice writting, but I don't think that will would take another girl to the botanic garden, even if he somehow got over lyra

cool but I honestly don't see Will getting over Lyra enough to have an honest relationship with someone else.