Reviews for Second Existence

Reviews For: Second Existence - Reviews: Page 1 of 11

MargotTenn 2008-06-17 ch 14,	abuseHello? I'm not normally a BIG whiner/begger but I'd love to see updates/new story. So -- pretty please with a cherry on top? Maybe? heh heh
Aria DeLoncray 2008-06-08 ch 19,	abuseGreat story!
briseis72 2008-06-06 ch 19,	abuseHi, Just want to review your wonderful fic that I just loved. There were so much twist and stuff, wouahouh. You kept me wanting to read your fic, more than that, I just couldn't stop. I really hope you already wrote the sequel cause I can't wait. I'll go check right now!! BRAVO BRAVO!
goldacharmed 2008-05-26 ch 18,	abuseIs there really a point anymore in telling you how much I love your witting? Well just for the record ill say it again. Y.O.U. R.O.C.K.! Anyhow, so like yeah this was too good. I love it so much. Chris is as good of an actor as Drew Fuller is. And that is saying something consorting how amazing drew is. I love love love love love it. later dude
goldacharmed 2008-05-26 ch 19,	abuseOh my freaking gosh. That was a really good story. One of the best I ever read. Dude you have one crazy talent. This was perfect in every way. The description, the emotion, the characters, the plot, the way it was written out, the way you got so perfectly inside the characters heads, all of t was out of this world crazy wonderfully wonderful in every way. It’s so good that I’m running out of complements for you. I loved every sec of it and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Thanks you for writing this great joy. I love every line I read. And I can’t wait to read your first ever published book. Witch by the way you better do. Or else I’ll go all evil on you. It’s never too late. By the way I wanted to let you know if you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of, I'm right here anytime you need k. or/and if you had any story ideas that you were thinking of putting into a published book, well I’d love to hear it. Later dude and I can’t wait to read the sequel to this.
flaming skulls 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abusehi. I'm new here, but goldacharmed told me of how great you are. so i went to see for my self and shes right. you rock. i cant wait to finished reading this great story. your off to a great start, and if i wasn't so busy i would read the whole thing right now. see ya.
goldacharmed 2008-05-23 ch 17,	abuseW.O.W. ok well that was some of the best writing i have ever read in my life. so were was i, oh i was telling you how much i loved the chapter. so anyway i love how you made this wyatt. its jsut like his your own charaicter. and in a strong way he is. and its so good, you made him to be just how he would be without chirs there. the tittle of the chapter is so good for it too. i love it. i also do things like chirs thinking hes way less inportant then the twice blessed one. but i know hes not. and i like him to be more important. i love the way Chris realized how much he was really needed. its about time. now its really late and I'm off to bed. but ill try to finish this tomorrow.
goldacharmed 2008-05-22 ch 16,	abusewow at last the truth was reviled to the evil freak. wow i just called one of the hottest guys in the world a freak. i take it back i take it back. anyway, wow you written with the passion of a 1 0 0 burning suns. yeah thats a hell of a lot of passion. you really rock you know. anyway you may have held back on the killer cliffy but i still cant wait for more. so with out farther adieu, on to the next.
goldacharmed 2008-05-22 ch 15,	abusehow will he get out indeed. I'm telling you, you just keep getting better and better with every chapter. I'm sorry but this isn't going to be as long of a review as my others, because that was a killer cliffy. and I'm dieing to go on. so on to the next it is.
goldacharmed 2008-05-22 ch 14,	abusei guess i didn't leave a review here too right. you know I'm running out of ways to tell you how great you are. i was in a charmed mood and i thought to my self i want to read a good charmed story, that i know for a fact is great and that i know is going to be written wonderfully. and guess who i thought of not even one sec later. thats right you. and i must say you never fail to live up to your self. i love the emotion in ever single chapter you write. i know we are to say things to help improvement in our reviews of chapters and stuff, but for the life of me i cant think of anything bad, of see any need in any part that needs work or is even possible to be unproved on. I'm sorry but i doubt anyone can find something wrong with perfection. oh well, on to the next chapter.
goldacharmed 2008-05-22 ch 13,	abuseI never reviewed this chapter. I only just noticed. I'm so so so so so so so very sorry it took me this long to read this. I was on a whole Danny Phantom kick and I wasn't in what I call a Charmed mood, and the most important reason is that I didn't have computer in moths, it was in the shop again and again and again. I finally got a new one, one that isn't Toshiba. I now have an hp. Its the same reason I didn't update anything in the same amount of time. but wow I love this chapter. I read it a long time ago, but I thought I reviewed it already. I guess not hu. Once again I'm so sorry. Now I'll try to leave you a review for every chapter I missed. But it might not be all at once. but I will catch up. After all I do love your writing. singed your biggest and still faithful fan.
Cirolane 2008-05-09 ch 19,	abuseThis story is quite brilliant. I wasn't sure at first if I was going to like it, because Wyatt was acting all weird. But then I realized that you did it on purpose to show that Wyatt would be very different without Chris. And for that I applaud you. It was a brilliant move and made the story all that more believable. My favorite chapter is 17, were Wyatt finally grows a back bone. “Hey, you may rule the Underworld, buddy, but I ruled the entire feakin’ world, so shut up!” - This line is the best line in the whole story. I was jumping in my chair when I read it. (I also may have acted it out loud...) I also really love it that Wyatt was a better evil ruler then Chris. I don't know why, maybe because it shows that Chris was never meant to be evil... Not that Wyatt was either. I also think that now it will be easier for the Halliwell brothers to grow up. Wyatt doesn't have to be that guiltridden about being evil, because, well, his brother was too! All in all, a very good story. I enjoyed it very much. Good job!
Candace Marie 2008-05-02 ch 19,	abuseThat was great! Can't wait for the sequal!
Anaeli 2008-04-23 ch 19,	abuseHey! OMG! great ending to an awesome fic! im so sad i didn't read this when immediately you put it on! :( internet problems! but i gotta say you out did yourself! keep writing!
StoryGirl83 2008-04-18 ch 19,	abuseI like how Chris is giving Zankou advice on how to raise him. Interesting turn of events, Chris is now more or less in control, except he now has to fight the source instead of his Dark self. Oh! That had to hurt, both of them. Physically Chris of course, but oh so emotionally Wyatt. Good. Glad that they were able to save Chris. That would have been very bad for Wyatt. I certainly understand why Wyatt was having trouble. As Leo always says . . . their powers come from their emotions. Piper sounds pretty annoyed. Her sons aren't following her thoughts on how things should be done and Chris is laughing. Awesome ending. I look foward to seeing how your next story plays out. And I wonder exactly where Leo went, the one from the future. Perhaps that will come into play? Great job. Great story.

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