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| fanfic crusader 2008-04-23 ch 4,  | abuse... Wow, this is a huge piece of ** if I ever did see one. There's no real direction, the kid has no real history, everyone is out of character, your punctuation and sentence structure is awful... Please do the world a favor and be rid of this. |
| ACforever 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat story. Love the reactions when ppl see Gibbs smile. Update soon. |
| louise1717 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abusei love gibbs and kids .please update soon.thanks |
| aserene 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abusegood work! Update soon! |
| xXChaotic-ResolveXx 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abuse... ... ... ... wow... hurry and update! i want to se what happens next! |
| xXChaotic-ResolveXx 2008-01-23 ch 3, | abusehaha! i like it! hurry and update! |
| ashy10rox 2008-01-23 ch 3, | abusewell done! please update asap! |
| special agent Ali 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuseheh heh that was cute, Jenna is sweet |
| Special Agent Meg 2007-11-21 ch 2, | abuseHey, I went on vacation and am trying to catch up on my reading. This is so cute. Hope you continue. Any chance we'll get some Shannon & Kelly flashbacks? |
| ashy10rox 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseWell done! Please update asap! |
| special agent Ali 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseaww how can anyone flame this its wonderful but please update faster I forgot about this one its still cute though how long is it though? one thing you spelled minute wrong though just so you know |
| AlechaSilvergrass 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abusehaha ^.^ i like it. love bert the farting hippo too :) |
| WBH21C 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseNice! |
| kaitlyn143 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusegood start. i like it |
| ashy10rox 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI like this story!! Good start, maybe a bit more of a relationship between Gibbs and Jenna would be good. Maybe she could open up to him and live with him for a while if they cant find her parents. And maybe she gets scared and hugs him or sits on his lap or something like that just to give the story some sweetness. But well done! Update asap! |